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lille billedanalyse
28. februar 2006 af
balerte (Slettet)
Hej! jeg har et stort problem med mit engelsk, derfor ville nogle måske kigge på fejl i dette og komme med gode ideer..

The first picture is called “New kids in the neighbourhood” and is made bye Norman Rockwell.
On the picture there are five children. The tree children are white and look over at the two new black kids. The blacks are moving into the whites neighbourhoods. The neighbourhood looks like a white middle-class neighbourhood and you can easy imagine that it is the first black people there are moving in. All the kids look interested on each other. Maybe have they never seen kids whit another colour of skin before, and now they have to be neighbours. The kids is maybe a little bit afraid, afraid of the not knowed. But even though they looks different, do they have allots of similarities for examples they have a pet, and of course they are all just kids.

The first picture is called “New kids in the neighbourhood” and is made bye Norman Rockwell.
On the picture there are five children. The tree children are white and look over at the two new black kids. The blacks are moving into the whites neighbourhoods. The neighbourhood looks like a white middle-class neighbourhood and you can easy imagine that it is the first black people there are moving in. All the kids look interested on each other. Maybe have they never seen kids whit another colour of skin before, and now they have to be neighbours. The kids is maybe a little bit afraid, afraid of the not knowed. But even though they looks different, do they have allots of similarities for examples they have a pet, and of course they are all just kids.
Svar #1
28. februar 2006 af line1209 (Slettet)
The first picture is called: ‘‘New kids in the neighbourhood’’ and is painted by Norman Rockwell. In the picture there are five children. Three of them are white and two of them are coloured. The white children are looking at the coloured children. (omformuler sætningen, the blacks are moving into the neighbourhood.) The neighbourhood looks like a white suburban neighbourhood and you can easily imagine that they are the first coloured people, who have ever moved into the place. The kids are interested in each other. Maybe they have never met anyone with a different skin colour before, and now they are going to be neighbours. The kids might be afraid, afraid of the unknown. Yet, even though they do not look the same, they still have a lot in common, for example, they all have a pet and of course they are all just kids.
Har bare skinnet den hurtigt igennem, håber du kan bruge nogle af rettelserne.
Har bare skinnet den hurtigt igennem, håber du kan bruge nogle af rettelserne.
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