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05. marts 2006 af martin88a (Slettet)
Hej jeg ville blive utrolig glad hvis nogen gad hjælpe med at rett følgende.


I am very worried about our situation; many youth don’t have the money to pay their payment. We have to do something, also because of the bad light we are in right now. We have to tighten our policy. I have some few suggestions.
The size on the amount, we give to the youth. I think that we often let the youth borrow too many money that their can afford to pay back.
The procedure for approval the loan. We have to see more thoroughgoing to the youth’s economy. We shall make sure that there economy can carry a rather large loan.
Advising at the youth in preparation on economy and a budget planning. We have to inform them what they can afford and what they can’t. I think a budget planning is a great thing to do.

I hope you carefully will think about my suggestions.



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Svar #1
05. marts 2006 af Mac3 (Slettet)

Du har allerede ét indlæg med denne tekst.

Svar #2
05. marts 2006 af martin88a (Slettet)

Ja men ingen svarede jo

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Svar #3
05. marts 2006 af IMB (Slettet)

Du skal bare være lidt tålmodig. Så vidt jeg kan se har Mac3 allerede prøvet at hjælpe dig. Ofte er det lettere at rette en oversættelse, når man også har den danske version.

Svar #4
05. marts 2006 af martin88a (Slettet)

Ja men det er ikke en oversættelse.
Og det skyldes at efter et stykke tid kan man jo ikke se min indlæg ude i højre side

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Svar #5
05. marts 2006 af Mac3 (Slettet)

Du har også et andet indlæg (Engelsk stil og Rettelse af fejl, såvidt jeg husker), som du har postet to gange. Selvom ingen svarer, så skal du lade være med at lave flere tråde om samme opgave.
Hjælpen herinde er en service, det er ikke noget, du har krav på.

Svar #6
05. marts 2006 af martin88a (Slettet)

Ja okay det må i undskylde skal jeg huske

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Svar #7
05. marts 2006 af Mac3 (Slettet)

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2)The procedure for LOAN approval (the loan). We have to (see)LOOK more thoroughgoing DETTE ER ET ADJEKTIV. DU SKAL FINDE ET ADVERBIUM (to)AT the youth’s economy. We shall ER DU SIKKER PÅ, AT DETTE ER DET MODALVERBUM DU BØR BRUGE? make sure that (there)THEIR economy can carry a rather large loan.
3)OMFORMULER DETTE PUNKT Advising at the youth in preparation on economy and (a) budget planning. We have to inform them what they can afford and what they can’t. I think (a) budget planning is a great thing to do.

I hope you carefully will think about my suggestions KIG LIGE PÅ ORDSTILLINGEN HER.



Svar #8
05. marts 2006 af martin88a (Slettet)

Tusind tak her er en opdateret version

I am very worried about our situation; many young people don’t have the money to make the payment. We have to do something, particularly because of the bad light we are in right now. We have to tighten our policy. I have a few suggestions.
1. The size of the amount, we give to the young people. I think that we often let the youth borrow too much money that they can not afford to pay back.
2. The procedure for loan approval. We have to look more thoroughgoing at the youth’s economy. We will make sure that their economy can carry a rather large loan.
3. Advising at the youth in preparation on economy and budget planning. We have to inform them what they can afford and what they can’t. I think budget planning is a great thing to do.

I hope you will think carefully about my suggestions.

Svar #9
05. marts 2006 af martin88a (Slettet)

Tusind tak her er en opdateret version

I am very worried about our situation; many young people don’t have the money to make the payment. We have to do something, particularly because of the bad light we are in right now. We have to tighten our policy. I have a few suggestions.
1. The size of the amount, we give to the young people. I think that we often let the youth borrow too much money that they can not afford to pay back.
2. The procedure for loan approval. We have to look more thoroughgoing at the youth’s economy. We will make sure that their economy can carry a rather large loan.
3. Advising at the youth in preparation on economy and budget planning. We have to inform them what they can afford and what they can’t. I think budget planning is a great thing to do.

I hope you will think carefully about my suggestions.

Svar #10
05. marts 2006 af martin88a (Slettet)

Tusind tak her er en opdateret version

I am very worried about our situation; many young people don’t have the money to make the payment. We have to do something, particularly because of the bad light we are in right now. We have to tighten our policy. I have a few suggestions.
1. The size of the amount, we give to the young people. I think that we often let the youth borrow too much money that they can not afford to pay back.
2. The procedure for loan approval. We have to look more thoroughgoing at the youth’s economy. We will make sure that their economy can carry a rather large loan.
3. Advising at the youth in preparation on economy and budget planning. We have to inform them what they can afford and what they can’t. I think budget planning is a great thing to do.

I hope you will think carefully about my suggestions.

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