mindre rettelse..

We are sailing ten a clock, and the boat we are going to sail in, looks pretty wild, “you know fast”, which I really like, because I like speed, and especially on the water, where I feel you got more room to lose one’s way, where I example can relate to some of my own experiences with different kinds of swim facilities tight behind a speedboat, home at Ærø. After a hurry explanation referring to the different diving equipments functions, I now think am ready, and got the ability to start the adventure. We are sailing about 30 minutes, before we came to the pearl, as the call it, the perfect diving place. When I came under the water, my first impress was “ god this water is clear and visible”, and you can’t miss to see all these fish down there, is just like you get blind by the sun reflecting of the fishes colors and pattern being at the their skins, they are everywhere.
After this active morning, the distance will now go to New Zealand, where I instead of being in the pleasant middle sea water, now are going to be in the nervousness and the sweats sauna. Now am going to jump bungyjump. A sport which start actually has taken it’s starting point from the island groups named Hebriderne, in the Pacific Ocean. Because here have the native men/boys through many ears, as a proof of their manhood, jumped out from bamboo towers, only tight with lianas. And this idée has been promoted wider, and today the biggest place to try bongyjomp is in New Zealand, were you have the opportunity to jump from 300 meters high from a helicopter, and which people pay many money for trying. So that’s of course obvious for me to try. We start to sail with a so-called water taxi, because am not the only one, who are going jump today, and when the helicopter we are going to jump from is out on the sea, a water taxi was the most easy and usable thing to use. When we came to the helicopter, we stepped up, and while the helicopter slowly gets higher and higher, I can feel that my heart is knocking faster than normal, a sign of, that I am nervous, but at the same time I feel a great exiting. When we suddenly had gained the 300 meters, and it became my turn to jump, the only thing I could think in the present time, were the previous instructions I had get before about security, I was simply choked for few seconds, even that they feels like much more. When I came back to normal, The jumpmaster was counting 5-4-3-2-1 GO!, and I jumped. The feeling while you are jumping is a fantastic rush, and you don’t discover any other things than your own screaming voice saying “!UUUUAAAHHH”, until you at last land in the water, calling on the boat picking you up. Am sure that I never will forget this rush feeling, and after trying it, I can only recommend it for everybody, because it’s all the money worth.
But not more talking I’m busy, because now am going to Rise stadium playing football.

det behøver ikke være så grundigt.

er der ingen..

den er ike såå lang igen

come on, ved godt jeg lyder utålmodig, men der må da være nogen.

Jeg kan komme med enkelt stavefejl:

Colors: Colours

"A sport which start actually has taken its starting point from the island groups named Hebriderne, in the Pacific Ocean"

Hvorfor har du "start" med?

det behøver som sagt ikke være så grundigt altså...

#6 det er ikke nødvendigvis en stavefejl, dog er color amerikansk engelsk og ikke britisk engelsk. Men min lærer ville også foretrække colour, men det er vel forskelligt fra lærer til lærer...

okay.. jeg er også langt fra stærk i engelsk... så har lært endnu mere :P

"So that’s of course obvious for me to try. We started to sail with a so-called water taxi, because I am not the only one, who is going to jump today…"

...og hvis nogen har et ord eller to til min engelsk tekst, så må i da også gerne hjælpe mig :)

"We are sailing about 30 minutes, before we came to the pearl,"

er det vi sejlede omkring 30 minuter før vi kom

eller

vi sejler 30 før vi kommer...?

Det skulle helst være i samme tid

den første..

I am sure that I never... :)

uhh?? hvad mener du m-ria

Mindre rettelse??;/ Jeg kan godt tage halvdelen.
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We are sailing (at) ten a clock(ten o'clock), and the boat we are going to sail in(on), looks pretty wild, “you know fast”, which I really like, because I like speed, and especially on the water, where I feel you got more room to lose one’s way, where I (for) example can relate to some of my own experiences with different kinds of swim facilities tight(tied) behind a speedboat, home at Ærø. After a hurry explanation referring to the different diving equipments' functions, I now think am ready, and got the ability to start the adventure. We are(were sailing/sailed) sailing (for) about 30 minutes, before we came to( evt. arriving at) the pearl, as the(they) call it, the perfect diving place. When I came under the water, my first impress(impression) was “ god(God) this water is clear and visible”, and you can’t miss to see(ikke to see) all these fish down there, is(it is?) just like you get blind(blinded) by the sun reflecting of the fishes' colors and pattern being at the their skins, they are everywhere.
After this active morning, the distance(??) will now go to New Zealand, where I instead of being in the pleasant Middle Sea water, now are(is) going to be in the nervousness and the sweats sauna. Now am going to jump bungyjump(ing).

Jeg stoppede her. Synes sgu ikk den hænger sammen, og kan ærlig talt heller ikk forstå det.=/

fordi det kun er et udklip i en stil

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