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Hjælp til en engelsk oversættelse!

19. januar 2004 af Blubb (Slettet)
Er der nogen der gider se min oversættelse igennem for fejl? Jeg er nemlig ikke så god til engelsk, så det ville være skønt hvis nogen ville hjælpe :)

Den danske version:
Engang rejste jeg fra Oklahoma til Chicago for at besøge min bror, Rabbit. Han tog imod mig, da jeg stod af bussen og på vej hen til hvor han boede, blev vi sultne og standsede op ved en restaurant, hvis vægge var helt af glas, så man kunne se alle de mennesker, der spiste derinde. De sad ikke ned, med stod ved en lang disk og hverken snakkede med hinanden eller så på hinanden. Vi besluttede at gå videre og spise på et rarere sted, Wallys´ Bar, hvor der var en masse mennekser, der kendte min bror. Det eneste mærkelige var, at de kaldte ham Indianer Joe i stedet for Rabbit, men ellers var de vældig flinke.

Min engelske version:
Once I traveled from Oklahoma to Chicago to visit my brother, Rabbit. He greeted me when I got of the bus and on the way to where he lived we got hungry and stopped by a resturant which walls were of glass so you could see all the people who ate in there. They did not sit down but stood by a long disk and did not talk or look at each other. Vi decided to keep on walking and ate at a nicer place, Wallys´ bar, where there were a lot of people who knew my brother. The only weird thing was that they called him Indian Joe instead of Rabbit but beside that they were very nice.

PÅ FORHÅND TUSIND TAK :)

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Svar #1
19. januar 2004 af Mads (Slettet)

En hurtig rettelse
"a restaurant whose walls were made (out) of glass"
"We decided" ikke "Vi decided" (det var vist bare en smutter i et svagt øjeblik ;).

Mads

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19. januar 2004 af ¤L¤ (Slettet)

Once I traveled from Oklahoma to Chicago to visit my brother Rabbit. He greeted me when I got of the bus and on the way to where he lived (eller to his home? Kommer an på hvor ordkorrekt det skal være)we got hungry and stopped by a resturant whose walls were made of glass so you could see all the people who ate in there. They did not sit down but stood by a long disk and did not talk or look at each other. We decided to keep on walking and ate at a nicer place: Wallys´ bar, where there were a lot of people who knew my brother. The only weird thing was that they called him Indian Joe instead of Rabbit but beside that they were very nice.

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