hjælp til fejl og evtuel konkret

Jeg vil meget gerne have hjælp til at for retted mine fejl jeg har svaret på 3 spørgsmål og spørgsmålene er.

Whrite about your own business you may consider

1. The advantages and disadvantages of having your own business?

2. The personal skills are required?

3. Whether you would like to start your own business?


Så har jeg skrevet om en shawarma bar. vil ikke om det er godt nok? være sød og rette det for mig stavefejl og om det er konkret det jeg har skrevet

1,The advantages of having my own business. Be a boss I must be active and satisfied the customers and good humour good looking, neat and clean restaurant Is a big advantaged.
About my stuff should be fresh meet and suitable prices and I get profit. Get the whole profit if I have employees the are a big advantages they can help me when they are rush of costumers in the restaurant only two employees will be enough for my restaurant because I only have two pay salary to only two person so can I save a lot of money. Some one say In short i can say for business man

Early to bed and early to rise

Makes a man healthy wealthy and wise


2,Disadvantages to have my own business are they are many ups and downs in the business. Ready for facing a big loss anytime every time competition with others whether also effective for a business expensive prices for costumers . Of course sickness is too. Point of problem.

3. So I have decided for me be a business man with all advantages and disadvantages.




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