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Engelsk stil - en der gider a rette =)
01. marts 2007 af
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Hej =)
Har skrevet en kort stil på ca. 1 side. Er der ikke en der gider at tjekke den igennem for fejl også er der også nogle danske ord imellem jeg ik ka oversætte - den ska afleveres imorgen !
På forhånd tak ;)
My first experienced of stealing
“Come on, we have to go now, it is too late” I said to my best friend Kassie, We have to go to shopping in the Bewerlyhills Shoppingcenter. We love to shop together, it is allways so fun, and we love to buy some diffrent kind of things every time we are out together.
Finally she was ready.
“Come on, run, we must ‘nå’ the bus” I said
We was come, and now was it time to buy all the beautyful sort of things, we saw. 1 hour later, our hands were full of bags, because we have bought many things. It was so fun, and every thing was allright until I saw the little boy who was stole something, in the shop Kassie were looking after a watch.
He was so dirty and there was “hul” in his clothes. I saw that he take some gold watches in a bag he had with him, there was nobody who saw it, because there was many people, you could not “lægge mærke” to him.
“Look Kassie, look after the little boy, i saw he put something in his bag” “Should I say it to one of the guards?” i asked.
“He looked like a poor little boy, but he can not get out something to steal, we must say it.”
“No i will first ask him why he do it, it could be there were something dangourious” I went over to the little boy, sit on my necks hold on him and just smile “I saw what you do, why do you do it?” I said to the little boy. “Please, i pray you don’t say it to anyone, I need this, my mum is verry ill she must take to a hospital, but we have not money” and his eyes were full of tears. “But why were you stolen? It is not good” i said. “I could not do something else. The doctors say that it is the lates day to morrow to be operated. What could I either do?” “Where are you living” I asked. “I will visit your mother” “Here near the center” he answerd. “Okay, but first must you go and leave the wachtes back, then can we go” “But... But my mum...” “Yes i know it. Leave them back. I’ll help you and your mother.” I called at Kassie and i told her all. We take with the little boy, Jack, to visit his mother. I just could not believe it! I can’t describe it with worts. It was so dangorious. A smal house, if you could call it for a house. The mother was very ill, was just standing there and looked at us. You could easy see that she was very ill. I told her all what I was wanted to do. I gave her some money, said that she should go and bee operated. 1 week after I was in the hospital where she was operated to visit her. She thanked me very much. You could see from her eyes how happy she was.
Har skrevet en kort stil på ca. 1 side. Er der ikke en der gider at tjekke den igennem for fejl også er der også nogle danske ord imellem jeg ik ka oversætte - den ska afleveres imorgen !
På forhånd tak ;)
My first experienced of stealing
“Come on, we have to go now, it is too late” I said to my best friend Kassie, We have to go to shopping in the Bewerlyhills Shoppingcenter. We love to shop together, it is allways so fun, and we love to buy some diffrent kind of things every time we are out together.
Finally she was ready.
“Come on, run, we must ‘nå’ the bus” I said
We was come, and now was it time to buy all the beautyful sort of things, we saw. 1 hour later, our hands were full of bags, because we have bought many things. It was so fun, and every thing was allright until I saw the little boy who was stole something, in the shop Kassie were looking after a watch.
He was so dirty and there was “hul” in his clothes. I saw that he take some gold watches in a bag he had with him, there was nobody who saw it, because there was many people, you could not “lægge mærke” to him.
“Look Kassie, look after the little boy, i saw he put something in his bag” “Should I say it to one of the guards?” i asked.
“He looked like a poor little boy, but he can not get out something to steal, we must say it.”
“No i will first ask him why he do it, it could be there were something dangourious” I went over to the little boy, sit on my necks hold on him and just smile “I saw what you do, why do you do it?” I said to the little boy. “Please, i pray you don’t say it to anyone, I need this, my mum is verry ill she must take to a hospital, but we have not money” and his eyes were full of tears. “But why were you stolen? It is not good” i said. “I could not do something else. The doctors say that it is the lates day to morrow to be operated. What could I either do?” “Where are you living” I asked. “I will visit your mother” “Here near the center” he answerd. “Okay, but first must you go and leave the wachtes back, then can we go” “But... But my mum...” “Yes i know it. Leave them back. I’ll help you and your mother.” I called at Kassie and i told her all. We take with the little boy, Jack, to visit his mother. I just could not believe it! I can’t describe it with worts. It was so dangorious. A smal house, if you could call it for a house. The mother was very ill, was just standing there and looked at us. You could easy see that she was very ill. I told her all what I was wanted to do. I gave her some money, said that she should go and bee operated. 1 week after I was in the hospital where she was operated to visit her. She thanked me very much. You could see from her eyes how happy she was.
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01. marts 2007 af mm :) (Slettet)
“Come on, we have to go now, it is too late,” I said to my best friend Kassie. We were shopping in the Bewerlyhills Shoppingcenter. We love to shop together, it is always so fun, and we love to buy some different kind of things everytime we are out together.
Finally she was ready.
“Come on, run, we must catch the bus.” I said
We had come to the mall, and now it was time to buy all the beautiful sort of things, we saw. One hour later our hands were full of bags, because we had bought many things. It was so fun, and every thing was allright until I saw the little boy who had stolen something in the shop where Kassie was looking after a watch.
He was dirty and there was holes in his clothes. I saw putting some gold watches in a bag he had with him, and nobody except me saw it because the store was so crowded.
“Look Kassie, look at the little boy, i saw him putting something in his bag - Should I say it to one of the guards?” i asked.
“He looks like a poor little boy, but he shouldn't get away with stealing things. We must say it.”
“No, i will ask why he did it first - in case it's something important.”
I went over to the little boy, sat on my knees, holded him and just smiled; “I saw what you did, why did you do it?” I asked the little boy.
“Please, I am begging you, don’t say it to anyone, I need this, my mum is verry ill, she must take to a hospital but we have no money” and his eyes were full of tears.
“But why did you steal? It is not good.” i said.
“I could not do something else. The doctors say that they must operate her tomorrow at the latest. What other option do I have?"
“Where do you live?” I asked. “I will visit your mother.”
“Here near the center.” he answerd.
“Okay, but first you must you go and leave the wachtes back, then we can go.”
“But... But my mum...”
“Yes i know that. Put them back. I’ll help you and your mother.”
I called at Kassie and I told her eveything.
We took with the little boy, Jack, to visit his mother. I just couldn't believe it! I can’t describe it with words. It was so dangerous. A small house, if you could even call it a house. The mother was very ill, she was just laying there and looking at us. You could easily see that she was very ill. I told her all what I was wanted to do. I gave her some money, said that she should go and get operated. 1 week after I was in the hospital where she was operated to visit her. She thanked me very much. You could tell from her eyes that she was very happy.
Finally she was ready.
“Come on, run, we must catch the bus.” I said
We had come to the mall, and now it was time to buy all the beautiful sort of things, we saw. One hour later our hands were full of bags, because we had bought many things. It was so fun, and every thing was allright until I saw the little boy who had stolen something in the shop where Kassie was looking after a watch.
He was dirty and there was holes in his clothes. I saw putting some gold watches in a bag he had with him, and nobody except me saw it because the store was so crowded.
“Look Kassie, look at the little boy, i saw him putting something in his bag - Should I say it to one of the guards?” i asked.
“He looks like a poor little boy, but he shouldn't get away with stealing things. We must say it.”
“No, i will ask why he did it first - in case it's something important.”
I went over to the little boy, sat on my knees, holded him and just smiled; “I saw what you did, why did you do it?” I asked the little boy.
“Please, I am begging you, don’t say it to anyone, I need this, my mum is verry ill, she must take to a hospital but we have no money” and his eyes were full of tears.
“But why did you steal? It is not good.” i said.
“I could not do something else. The doctors say that they must operate her tomorrow at the latest. What other option do I have?"
“Where do you live?” I asked. “I will visit your mother.”
“Here near the center.” he answerd.
“Okay, but first you must you go and leave the wachtes back, then we can go.”
“But... But my mum...”
“Yes i know that. Put them back. I’ll help you and your mother.”
I called at Kassie and I told her eveything.
We took with the little boy, Jack, to visit his mother. I just couldn't believe it! I can’t describe it with words. It was so dangerous. A small house, if you could even call it a house. The mother was very ill, she was just laying there and looking at us. You could easily see that she was very ill. I told her all what I was wanted to do. I gave her some money, said that she should go and get operated. 1 week after I was in the hospital where she was operated to visit her. She thanked me very much. You could tell from her eyes that she was very happy.
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