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nogen som har lyst til at rette (det engelske)
27. august 2007 af
tazz0r (Slettet)
fra dansk til engelsk! (undskyld dobbeltpost) men lavede en dum "emne"
En efterårsdag var fire unge mennesker på vej ud til en sø. Efter nogle hårde uger på college trængte de til at slappe af; måske kunne det være spændende at prøve noget nyt, noget anderledes.
Da de efter nogle timers kørsel nåede søen, så de, at den var helt øde. Men i stedet for fornuftigt at vende hjem igen, besluttede de at få en spændende oplevelse ud af det.
Ude på søen flød en tømmerflåde dovent og stille. Efter at have drillet hinanden lidt, svømmede de ud til flåde; naturligvis skulle drengene vise sig, så de nåede den først. snart efter kom pigerne også svømmende, men inden da havde drengene observereret noget meget mærkeligt. Aldrig havde de set noget lignende. Mest af alt lignede det en olieplet; men hvad der virkelig skræmte dem var, at den bevægede sig - lidt som en haj. Sort var den! Sær var den!
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One autumn day was four young people on the way to the lake. After some hard weeks at college, they needed to unwind. Maybe it could be thrilling to try something new something diverse. When they after a couple of hours drive reached the lake, they saw it was completely deserted. Instead of reasonably turning around, they decide to get an exciting experience out of it.
Out on the lake a raft floated indolent and silent. After they had teased each other slightly they swam out to the raft. Naturally, the boys had to show off so they reached it first. Shortly after swam the Girls as well but right before they boys had spotted something very out of the ordinary. Never had they seen something like it. Most of all it looked like an oil spill but what really frightened them was that it moved like a shark. Black was it! Odd was it!
En efterårsdag var fire unge mennesker på vej ud til en sø. Efter nogle hårde uger på college trængte de til at slappe af; måske kunne det være spændende at prøve noget nyt, noget anderledes.
Da de efter nogle timers kørsel nåede søen, så de, at den var helt øde. Men i stedet for fornuftigt at vende hjem igen, besluttede de at få en spændende oplevelse ud af det.
Ude på søen flød en tømmerflåde dovent og stille. Efter at have drillet hinanden lidt, svømmede de ud til flåde; naturligvis skulle drengene vise sig, så de nåede den først. snart efter kom pigerne også svømmende, men inden da havde drengene observereret noget meget mærkeligt. Aldrig havde de set noget lignende. Mest af alt lignede det en olieplet; men hvad der virkelig skræmte dem var, at den bevægede sig - lidt som en haj. Sort var den! Sær var den!
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One autumn day was four young people on the way to the lake. After some hard weeks at college, they needed to unwind. Maybe it could be thrilling to try something new something diverse. When they after a couple of hours drive reached the lake, they saw it was completely deserted. Instead of reasonably turning around, they decide to get an exciting experience out of it.
Out on the lake a raft floated indolent and silent. After they had teased each other slightly they swam out to the raft. Naturally, the boys had to show off so they reached it first. Shortly after swam the Girls as well but right before they boys had spotted something very out of the ordinary. Never had they seen something like it. Most of all it looked like an oil spill but what really frightened them was that it moved like a shark. Black was it! Odd was it!
Svar #3
27. august 2007 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)
ja, men har du ikke fået den som en klasseopgave? jeg har jo lige sendt rettelsen af sted til en. Nu får en hurtig rettelse, men jeg garanterer ikke for noget, for jeg har ikke emre tid:
One autumn day four young people (was) on (their) the way to the lake. After some hard weeks at college, they needed to unwind. Maybe it could be thrilling to try something new something (different, they thought). When after a couple of hours (they) reached the lake, they saw (that) it was completely deserted. Instead of reasonably turning around, they (decided) to get an exciting experience out of it.
Out on the lake a raft floated indolent and silent. After they had teased each other slightly they swam out to the raft. Naturally, the boys had to show off so they reached it first. Shortly after (the girls) (also) swam but right before (the) boys had spotted something very out of the ordinary. Never had they seen something like it. Most of all it looked like an oil spill but what really frightened them was that it moved like a shark. Black (as it was)! Odd (as it was)!
One autumn day four young people (was) on (their) the way to the lake. After some hard weeks at college, they needed to unwind. Maybe it could be thrilling to try something new something (different, they thought). When after a couple of hours (they) reached the lake, they saw (that) it was completely deserted. Instead of reasonably turning around, they (decided) to get an exciting experience out of it.
Out on the lake a raft floated indolent and silent. After they had teased each other slightly they swam out to the raft. Naturally, the boys had to show off so they reached it first. Shortly after (the girls) (also) swam but right before (the) boys had spotted something very out of the ordinary. Never had they seen something like it. Most of all it looked like an oil spill but what really frightened them was that it moved like a shark. Black (as it was)! Odd (as it was)!
Svar #5
27. august 2007 af -Zeta- (Slettet)
Jeg er godt nok ulideligt træt, men jeg har tilladt mig at komme med et bud.
/One/(Some) autumn day /was/ four young people (were) on /the/(their) way to /the/(a) lake. After some /hard/(strenuous) weeks at college, they needed to /unwind/(relax)/./(;) /Maybe/(perhaps) it could be thrilling to try something new(,) something /diverse/(different). /When/(As) they(,) after a couple of hours drive(,) reached the lake, they saw (that) it was completely deserted. (But) /I/(i)nstead of reasonably /turning around/(returning home), they /decide/(decided) to get an exciting experience out of it.
Out on the lake a raft was floated indolent(ly) and silent(ly). After /they had/(having) teased each other slightly(,) they swam out to the raft. Naturally, the boys had to show off so they reached it first. Shortly after(,) /swam/ the Girls (were also swimming towards the raft) /as well/ but /right/(just) /before/(prior to that) /they/(the) boys /had/ spotted something very /out of the ordinary/(strange). /Never had they/(They had never) seen /something/(anything) like it. Most of all it looked like /an/ oil spill(,) but what (that) really frightened them was that it (was moving)/moved/ like a shark. Black /was it/(as it was)! Odd /was it/(as it was)!
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/One/(Some) autumn day /was/ four young people (were) on /the/(their) way to /the/(a) lake. After some /hard/(strenuous) weeks at college, they needed to /unwind/(relax)/./(;) /Maybe/(perhaps) it could be thrilling to try something new(,) something /diverse/(different). /When/(As) they(,) after a couple of hours drive(,) reached the lake, they saw (that) it was completely deserted. (But) /I/(i)nstead of reasonably /turning around/(returning home), they /decide/(decided) to get an exciting experience out of it.
Out on the lake a raft was floated indolent(ly) and silent(ly). After /they had/(having) teased each other slightly(,) they swam out to the raft. Naturally, the boys had to show off so they reached it first. Shortly after(,) /swam/ the Girls (were also swimming towards the raft) /as well/ but /right/(just) /before/(prior to that) /they/(the) boys /had/ spotted something very /out of the ordinary/(strange). /Never had they/(They had never) seen /something/(anything) like it. Most of all it looked like /an/ oil spill(,) but what (that) really frightened them was that it (was moving)/moved/ like a shark. Black /was it/(as it was)! Odd /was it/(as it was)!
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Svar #8
28. august 2007 af Stephansen (Slettet)
One autumn day four young people were heading out to a lake. After some hard weeks at college they needed to relax; perhaps it could be exiting to try something new, something different. As they after a couple of hours driving, reached the lake, they saw it was completely deserted. But instead of turning home again reasonably, they decided to get an interesting experience out of it. Out on the lake a raft floated around slow and calm. After having teased each other a bit, they swam out to the raft. Of course the boys had to show off, so they reached it first. Soon after the girls also came swimming, but sooner than that the boys had observed something strange. Never had they seen anything like it. Most of all it looked as an oil stain; but what really frightened them was that it moved – a bit like a shark. Black it was! Strange it was!
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