Engelsk oversættelse..

Har en lidt lang engelsk oversættelse, som jeg er rimelig meget i tvivl om er rigtig.. Synes mange steder det lyder lidt underligt :) Ville være fedt hvis nogen gad kigge på den!

Dansk:
'Sønner af en fodboldspiller'
Peter og Michael er brødre og sønner af en berømt dansk fodboldspiller. Måske var det derfor, at de selv valgte at koncentrere sig om en karriere i fodboldens verden. Drengenes mor ville ellers hellere have, at de begyndte at gå til spil. Faktisk lærte de at spiller på trompet og violin og var ganske gode til det. De optrådte mange gange på skolen, men det var fodbolden, der trak. Skolen havde ikke den store interesse, og lektierne ikke den store opmærksomhed. I gymnasietiden fik de kontrakt med en stor klub, så de delte tiden mellem lektier og fodbold. Alligevel fortsatte begge drenge på universitetet, hvor de læste idræt.
Nu er de begge professionelle i udlandet, i Holland og England. De taler sammen flere gange om ugen via telefon og sender e-mails til hinanden. Livet som fodboldspiller i både England og Holland er ret hårdt: træning to gange om dagen og kampe to gange om ugen. Der spilles også om vinteren, mens der er pause om sommeren. Der er imidlertid forskelle på måden, der trænes på i de to lande. Englænderne lægger vægt på den fysiske træning, mens hollænderne træner taktik og teknik.

Engelsk:
'Sons of a Soccer Player'
Peter and Michael are brothers, and sons of a famous Danish soccer player. Maybe that was why they themselves choose to concentrate on a career in the world of soccer. The mother of the boys would rather have seen that they had begun taking lessons in music. Actually they did learn to play the trumpet and the violin and were very good at it. They performed many times at the school, but it was the soccer that weighed more heavily. The boys did not have great interest in school and homework did not get the biggest attention. In their years of grammar school they both signed contracts with a major club, so they divided the time between homework and soccer. Yet both boys went on to college, where they studied athletics.
Now they are both professional abroad, in Holland and England. They communicate together several times a week by telephone and sends e-mails to each other. Life as a soccer player in both England and Holland is pretty hard: training two times a day and matches two times a week. There is also played during the winter, whilst there is pause throughout the summer. There is however differences in the way the training works in the two countries. The English attach importance to physical training whilst the Dutch train tactic and technique.