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engelsk oversættelse ejefald
29. januar 2008 af
lavieestbelle (Slettet)
Hej alle sammen. Er der en som er god til engelsk som vil hjælpe mig? Engelsk er ik lige min gode side.. jeres opgave er at rette for ejefald og hjælpe mig med at skrive nogle sætninger i "mere engelsk" og ikke direkte oversat fra engelsk. tak for forhånd
Music in the Underground
It is an “efterårsmorgen” in London and the start of a new working day for Taiken Mikkola. With a million of other people, the 18-year-old “finne” goes down to the Underground (på dansk: går ned til undergrunden) to start the work of the day. But as Mikkola comes down to the platform of the Underground, he pulls a trumpet and is already at work. It is hard, both for the feet and the pride but Mikkola’s humour does not seem to be damaged. ”London is the best place” he says, as he looks at the passenger’s faces. You can not make money in New York’s or Paris’s Undergrounds, but the Londoner’s attitude/opinion for young people is very friendly. On a working day of 10 hours Mikkola can make as much as £ 30. The idea is not just Mikkola’s. To survive and to be able to buy bread and at the baker’s and meat at the butcher’s over 500 young musicians from all over the world plays in the Underground of London. They play everything from the guitar and the harp. Mikkola and many of these foreigners spend the cold months of the year in the warmth of the Underground. And the warmth is more friendly here than the one on the streets. But it is not enough to be able to sing and play. You have to have an actor’s ability to look innocent, if the cops show up. Taiken Mikkola has decided to stay in England for three years afterwards he doesn’t know what to do. This is many young people’s situation today. Because of unemployment they feel restless and futureless.
Music in the Underground
It is an “efterårsmorgen” in London and the start of a new working day for Taiken Mikkola. With a million of other people, the 18-year-old “finne” goes down to the Underground (på dansk: går ned til undergrunden) to start the work of the day. But as Mikkola comes down to the platform of the Underground, he pulls a trumpet and is already at work. It is hard, both for the feet and the pride but Mikkola’s humour does not seem to be damaged. ”London is the best place” he says, as he looks at the passenger’s faces. You can not make money in New York’s or Paris’s Undergrounds, but the Londoner’s attitude/opinion for young people is very friendly. On a working day of 10 hours Mikkola can make as much as £ 30. The idea is not just Mikkola’s. To survive and to be able to buy bread and at the baker’s and meat at the butcher’s over 500 young musicians from all over the world plays in the Underground of London. They play everything from the guitar and the harp. Mikkola and many of these foreigners spend the cold months of the year in the warmth of the Underground. And the warmth is more friendly here than the one on the streets. But it is not enough to be able to sing and play. You have to have an actor’s ability to look innocent, if the cops show up. Taiken Mikkola has decided to stay in England for three years afterwards he doesn’t know what to do. This is many young people’s situation today. Because of unemployment they feel restless and futureless.
Svar #2
29. januar 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)
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It is an autumn morning in London and the /start/(beginning) of a new /working/ day(‘s work) for Taiken Mikkola.
(Together with)/With a/ million(s) of other people, the 18-year-old Finn goes down to the Underground to start /the work of the/ (to)day(‘s work).
But as (soon as) Mikkola (has come) /comes/ down to the (Underground) platform /of the Underground/, he pulls (out) a trumpet and is already at work.
It is hard/,/(work for) both /for the/ feet and /the/ pride but Mikkola’s /humour/(spirits) do/es/ not seem to be /damaged/(harmed).
”London is the best place”(,) he says, as he /looks at/(watches) the passenger/’/s(‘) faces.
You can/ /not make money in (the undergrounds of)New York/’s/ or Paris/’s Undergrounds/, but the Londoner/’/s(‘) attitude /for/(towards the) young people is very friendly.
/On/(In) a working day of /10/(ten) hours(,) Mikkola can make as much as £ 30.
The idea is not /just/(only) Mikkola’s.
(In order)/To/ (to) survive and to be able to buy bread /and/ at the baker’s and meat at the butcher’s(,) /over/(more than) 500 young musicians from all over the world play/s in the Underground of/ London (Underground).
They play everything from the guitar and the harp.
Mikkola and many of these foreigners spend the cold(est) months of the year in the warmth of the Underground.
And the warmth (here) is more friendly (than)/here than the one on/(in) the streets.
But it is not enough (just) to be able to sing and play.
You /have/(got) to have an actor’s ability to look innocent/,/ if the cops show up.
Taiken Mikkola has decided to stay in England for three years(;) afterwards he does/n’t/ (not) know what to do.
This is (the situation of) many young people/’s situation/ today.
Because of unemployment they feel restless and futureless.
(...) = indsættes
/.../ = slettes
Bare skriv hvis du har spørgsmål!
It is an autumn morning in London and the /start/(beginning) of a new /working/ day(‘s work) for Taiken Mikkola.
(Together with)/With a/ million(s) of other people, the 18-year-old Finn goes down to the Underground to start /the work of the/ (to)day(‘s work).
But as (soon as) Mikkola (has come) /comes/ down to the (Underground) platform /of the Underground/, he pulls (out) a trumpet and is already at work.
It is hard/,/(work for) both /for the/ feet and /the/ pride but Mikkola’s /humour/(spirits) do/es/ not seem to be /damaged/(harmed).
”London is the best place”(,) he says, as he /looks at/(watches) the passenger/’/s(‘) faces.
You can/ /not make money in (the undergrounds of)New York/’s/ or Paris/’s Undergrounds/, but the Londoner/’/s(‘) attitude /for/(towards the) young people is very friendly.
/On/(In) a working day of /10/(ten) hours(,) Mikkola can make as much as £ 30.
The idea is not /just/(only) Mikkola’s.
(In order)/To/ (to) survive and to be able to buy bread /and/ at the baker’s and meat at the butcher’s(,) /over/(more than) 500 young musicians from all over the world play/s in the Underground of/ London (Underground).
They play everything from the guitar and the harp.
Mikkola and many of these foreigners spend the cold(est) months of the year in the warmth of the Underground.
And the warmth (here) is more friendly (than)/here than the one on/(in) the streets.
But it is not enough (just) to be able to sing and play.
You /have/(got) to have an actor’s ability to look innocent/,/ if the cops show up.
Taiken Mikkola has decided to stay in England for three years(;) afterwards he does/n’t/ (not) know what to do.
This is (the situation of) many young people/’s situation/ today.
Because of unemployment they feel restless and futureless.
(...) = indsættes
/.../ = slettes
Bare skriv hvis du har spørgsmål!
Svar #3
29. januar 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)
... /over/(more than) 500 young musicians from all over the world play/s in the Underground of/ London (Underground).
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... /over/(more than) 500 young musicians from all over the world play/s/ in /the Underground of/ London (Underground).
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... /over/(more than) 500 young musicians from all over the world play/s/ in /the Underground of/ London (Underground).
Svar #5
29. januar 2008 af lavieestbelle (Slettet)
forresten, det her er den danske tekst, jeg synes der er nogen sætninger som ikk er oversat DIREKTE fra min danske tekst til engelsk
Svar #7
30. januar 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)
#5.
Nu har jeg ikke kendskab til den tilhørende danske tekst. Normalt bør man altid vedlægge den danske tekst for at opnå en så præcis oversættelse som muligt. Dog gør det ikke noget, at man en gang imellem skriver en smule nuanceret oversættelse, dog uden at ændre nogen detaljer.
Nu har jeg ikke kendskab til den tilhørende danske tekst. Normalt bør man altid vedlægge den danske tekst for at opnå en så præcis oversættelse som muligt. Dog gør det ikke noget, at man en gang imellem skriver en smule nuanceret oversættelse, dog uden at ændre nogen detaljer.
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