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20. september 2004 af ss (Slettet)
He doesn't want to live in the same place with the unintelligent persons, as he thought that he don't is like them.He will be a different person than them.He has a bad relationship both with his mother and father, and he hates them both. His mother Thelma who has lived in Plaistow in bad cicumstances all her life, she known porverty and hardship.But this bad background has made her very aggressive when it comes to money. She doesn't show Joe love , care end safety. So it makes that the relationship between the mother and her son is indeed missing.Maybe that's why Joe has ended as a criminal, he needs somebody to trust. He does not respect his father, whereas he has respect for his mother even though he says her:.............
His father doesn't do anything about his son and his wife.Therefor hate Joe his father, also his attitude to life. His parents have differents way of thinking, maybe that's why he hates them. Joe has a bad circle because his friends are all troubelmakers and they are more or less criminals. It's very hard for him to get out of that circle.The themes are racism, survival and being different. I think the text give us a example of a young skinhead boy, who try to get out of the same place he all time is.He will be a different boy, as a skinhead who don't like so much the black people.But he is in the beginning to be a part of skinhead persons...

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20. september 2004 af ss (Slettet)

please...er der virkelig ik nogen der vil rette....det haster

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20. september 2004 af Moderatoren

Retter kun de største fejl og kun de gramatiske ikke indholdet...


He does not want to live in the same place with unintelligent persons, because he thought that he did not like them. He will be a different person than them.He has a bad relationship with both his mother and his father, and he hates them both. His mother Thelma who has lived in Plaistow in bad cicumstances all her life, she has known porverty and hardship.But this bad background has made her very aggressive when it comes to money. She does not show Joe love or care or safety. So it makes the relationship between the mother and her son missing.Maybe that is why Joe has ended as a criminal, he needs somebody to trust. He does not respect his father, whereas he has respect for his mother even though he says her:.............
His father does not do anything about his son and his wife.Therefor Joe hates his father and his attitude to life. His parents have different way of thinking, maybe that is why he hates them. Joe has a bad circle because his friends are all troubelmakers and they are more or less criminals. It is very hard for him to get out of that circle.The themes are racism, survival and being different. I think the text give us a example of a young skinhead boy, who try to get out of the same place he is in all the time.He will be a different boy, as a skinhead who do not like black people. But he is in the beginning to be a part of skinhead persons...

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