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please..lidt hjælp til engelsk..
26. september 2004 af
suzie (Slettet)
hej..jeg håber der er nogen der lige vil se denne korte stil igennem for gramatiske fejl. jeg vil være meget taknemmelig..på forhånd tak..
(rettes i datid)
At that time, I still was in the 9th grade. Turkey should play with Brazil in VM, but they should play at school time, so everybody in the class had to play truant from the school. Later we run away from the school to a shopping center, which had a big TV screen. We take the train and then one of my classmate (get catch=blev fanget) from the (kontrollør), because she had no ticket. We leave her with the (kontrollør) and get out of the train. When we finally came to the shopping center, another one in my class gets cached from his father. He gets a real thrashing, while we stood and stared at him. We let him be alone with his fate, because he could not go longer (han var ikke I stand til at gå længere.) Then we came to the big screen, Brazil had score. A boy in my class begins to shout and then we get throwed. Then I get phoned and it was my teacher. He said that we had exam test in mathematic and that we have to be in the school on one hour (ellers) we would get zero everybody. We hurried and run to the train, but the train was late. We wait for the train about 20 minutes and when we came to the school we all get zero in our exam.
(rettes i datid)
At that time, I still was in the 9th grade. Turkey should play with Brazil in VM, but they should play at school time, so everybody in the class had to play truant from the school. Later we run away from the school to a shopping center, which had a big TV screen. We take the train and then one of my classmate (get catch=blev fanget) from the (kontrollør), because she had no ticket. We leave her with the (kontrollør) and get out of the train. When we finally came to the shopping center, another one in my class gets cached from his father. He gets a real thrashing, while we stood and stared at him. We let him be alone with his fate, because he could not go longer (han var ikke I stand til at gå længere.) Then we came to the big screen, Brazil had score. A boy in my class begins to shout and then we get throwed. Then I get phoned and it was my teacher. He said that we had exam test in mathematic and that we have to be in the school on one hour (ellers) we would get zero everybody. We hurried and run to the train, but the train was late. We wait for the train about 20 minutes and when we came to the school we all get zero in our exam.
Svar #1
26. september 2004 af suzie (Slettet)
please..er der ikke nogen der hurtig vil rette den igennem for fejl??mange tak på forhånd..
Svar #3
26. september 2004 af Kronvald (Slettet)
At that time, I WAS STILL in the 9th grade. Turkey PLAYED Brazil in THE WORLD CHAMPIONSCHIP, but they PLAYED DURING school time, so everyONE in the class had to play truant from school. Later we RAN away from school to a shopping center, which had a big TV screen. We TOOK the train and then one of my classmate GOT CAUGHT BY A CONDUCTOR, because she had no ticket. We LEFT her with the CONDUCTOR and GOT OFF the train. When we finally came to the shopping center, another OFF my class GOT CAUGHT BY his father. He GOT a real thrashing, while we stood and stared at him. We let him alone with his fate, because he WAS NOT ABLE TO GO WITH US ANYMORE. Then we came to the big screen, Brazil had SCORED. A boy in my class BEGAN to shout OUT and then we get THROWN OUT. Then I get A CALL and it was my teacher. He said that we had A test in MATH and that we HAD to be AT school IN one hour OR we ALL would get zeros. We hurried and ran BACK to the train, but the train was late. We WAITED for the train FOR about 20 minutes and when we came BACK to the school we all GOT zeros AT our TEST.
Håber du kan bruge det
Jane
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Håber du kan bruge det
Jane
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Svar #4
26. september 2004 af Trajkovski (Slettet)
At that time, I was still in the 9th grade. Turkey should play against Brazil in the WC, but they should play in school time, so everybody in the class had to play truant from school. Later we ran away from school to a shopping center, which had a big TV screen. We took the train and then one of my classmates was caught by a train comptroller/supervisor, because she had no ticket. We left her with the comptroller/supervisor and got out of the train. When we finally came to the shopping center, another one in my class got catched by his father. He was being told off, while we just stood and stared at him. We leaved him to his fate, because he could not go any longer (han var ikke I stand til at gå længere. Er det virkelig det du vil sige her?) Then we came to the big screen TV, Brazil had already scored. A boy in my class began to shout and then we got thrown out. Then I got phoned and it was my teacher. He said that we would have a test in mathematics in one hour and if we weren't there we would all be awarded zero points. We hurried and ran to the train, but the train was late. We waited for the train about 20 minutes and when we came to the school we all got zero in our test because we were late.
Svar #5
26. september 2004 af Trajkovski (Slettet)
Du kan med fordel benytte dig af http://dictionary.cambridge.org/, når du retter stile. Det er en engelsk engelsk ordbog, der udgives af Cambridge universitetet.
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