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Hun havde bestået sin sidste eksamen. Nu var hun endelig blevet lærer. Lige siden hun var en lille pige, havde hun drømt om enten at blive lærer, sygeplejerske eller læge. Hun havde altid ønsket at få et job, hvor hun kunne hjælpe mennesker. Kun få gange hvad hun været i tvivl. Da hun var 10, havde hun en god veninde, som spillede badminton fire gange om ugen, og de begyndte at spille sammen. Hendes veninde, ville være professionel badmintonspiller, så en overgang ville hun også være det, men kun i kort tid; hun indså*, at hun aldrig ville blid god til sport. Selv om hun havde haft få penge, mens hun studerede, havde hun nydt hvert minut. Hun havde sagt til sig selv mindst tusinde gange, at hun havde valgt den rigtige uddannelse, og nu var hun endelig lærer. Hun glædede sig til arbejdet på skolen og til samværet med børn. Måske kunne hun blive leder af den skole, hvor hun selv havde gået, da hun var barn. Hvis det skete, ville hun blive en af de lykkeligste mennesker på jorden, selv om hendes far altid havde sagt, at en kvindes plads er i hjemmet..

Jeg har oversat det til:

She had passed its final exam. Now she had finally become a teacher. Ever since she was a little girl, she had dreamed of becoming either a teacher, nurse or doctor. She had always wanted to get a job where she could help people. Only Few times she has been in doubt. When she was 10, she had a good friend, who played badminton four times a week, and they started playing together. Her friend, would/wanted? to be a professional badminton player, so for a while she would also be, but only for a short time; she realized that she would never be good at sports. Even if she had had little money, while she studied, she had enjoyed every minute. She had said to herself at least a thousand times that she had chosen the right training, and now she was finally teacher. She gladly looked forward to work at the school and to getting the company of children. Maybe she could become leader*/head/principle? Of that school, where she/herself had gone, when she was a child. If it happened, she would become one of the happiest people on earth, although her father had always said that a woman's place is at home .
 

Der hvor der er Fed/kursiv/streget er der jeg er lidt i tvilv.

I må meget gerne rette disse fejl eller andre, eller skrive foreslag.

:)