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den danske:

Under et besøg i Danmark hørte den britiske forfatter Rose Tremain legenden om Christian den 4.s orkester, der for næsten 400 år siden sad i kælderen på Rosenborg Slot og spillede himmelsk musik, som gennem et system af kanaler nåede hoffets ører oven på i salene.
”Jeg var betaget af tanken om disse fremragende musikere, der sad dernede i kulde og mørke og var helt afhængige af kongens ønsker. Ved at skubbe til en lem kunne man lukke af til kælderen, og musikerne kunne se på de flagrende lys, at de godt kunne pakke sammen”.
Orkestret var kendt for at have de bedste musikere i hele Europa. I det hele taget var kongen kendt for sin kvalitetssans og for at insistere på, at alt dansk skulle være af fineste kvalitet, selv om nationen på grund af hans uheldige krige havde meget få penge.
 

den engelske:

During a visit in Denmark heard the British writer Rose Tremain the legend about Christian 4.´s orchestra, which for almost 400 years ago sat in the cellar in Rosenborg Slot and played heavenly music, which through a system reached the court´s ears above in the halls.
“I was fascinated by the thought about these brilliant musicians, who sat down there in cold and darkness and was completely dependent on the king´s wishes. By pushing to a hatch man could lock off to the cellar and the musicians could see at the flickering lights that they well could pack up”.
The orchestra was known for to have the best musicians in whole Europe. Was the king known for his sense of quality and to insist on that all Danish should be of finest quality, even though the nation because of his unlucky wars had really few money.