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lille historie på engelsk - rettes haster!

14. januar 2009 af Camen (Slettet)

er der nogen som kan rette denne engelsk historie:

It was a cold Christmas morning in December; the snow was falling down and lay down as a carpet over the road.
An English man with his Spanish wife from United States was on the way, to the family, to celebrate the Christmas together with her Aunt, Uncle and theirs newborn baby: Mina. The Uncle live in a big house in Washington, near the White House, were President Bush live in.
After a couple of days travelling, they went over to the house, where the family live. The House was big and white, and has a very nice Garden. They went out from the Taxi and at the same time, they could hear Baby crying – it was Mina, she was born in November 19.
They were invited inside and the family was so glad to see them they haven’t seen each other since last year in July. The Aunt has made a lot of food and a lot of gifts were under the Christmas tree.
After all the Christmas meal was eaten – they danced on the Christmas tree, and the Uncle was reading the traditional Christmas Book named “Santa Claus is coming tonight”.

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15. januar 2009 af Chiiiqua (Slettet)

hmm .. det skal lige siges jeg er ikke 100%, men ret sikker..

Fejl:

1.linje: ...2down and lay down as a carpet..." = ".. falling down and lay[ing] as af carpet ".. (uden down)

4.linje: .."and theirs newborn baby: Mina" = "and their newborn baby, Mina" (der skal altså ikke noget s på their og man bruger sjællendt kolontegn i sådan en sætning på engelsk.)

5. linje: jeg mener ikke der skal være noget "in" efter .. president Bush live.

6.linje: jeg tror også du skal undlade "over" i "they went over to the house" -det ville også lyde meget bedre hvis du skrev "they arrived to the house"

9.linje: du skal prøcisere hvilken baby, f.eks "a baby" eller "the Baby"

11.linje: du skal undlade "has" i "the Aunt has made"

13.linje: de danser ve ikke på træet men rundt om, så det hedder: "dances around the crist.."

ellers vil jeg lige sige, at det er lidt uklart, hvises familie det er, konen eller manden eller begges!!!! .. såå dertil skal der også gøres nogle småændringer.

som sagt er jeg ikk 100% sikker, men det er i hvert fald mit bud.

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