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Hallo there!
I want to tell about my holiday on Crete, because it’s a very memorable place and the place means a lot to me. There are many reasons why the place means a lot to me, and one of the reasons is that it was the best holiday I ever have been on, and one more thing that impressed me most were all the big mountains as we were surrounded by, and no matter where you looked around you could see and scents the water. Because in Denmark where I live there are not many mountains and you cannot see and scents the water, only if you live close to water. A very strange thing that also impressed me a little was their hospitality. I thought that the local residents would be so hospitalities like Denmark, but I was wrong. They are so sweet and like to help if you have a little trouble with formulating what you want or buy.
I have many memorable experiences. The best experience was meeting all the people I did. We were together every day at the pool and we ate together every evening. I met two from Norway and nine from Denmark. Today I’m still talking with them all over messenger and my mobile, and we have all been together after the holiday on Crete.
I have a very special experience with them all. It was an evening when we sat down on the beach and drink, but on Crete may you not drink on the beach because it is a public place, but we did it anyway, almost every night and if the police discovered it we should all pay a fine.
But the last night we were together it all went wrong. We went down on the beach and drink again, but after two hours we heard two men shouting at us from far away, but we get agreed that it probably was to men who also had fun just like us. But we were wrong. The two men came nearer and the nearer they came, we could see that they were not two ordinary men, but police men. We were all panicked and threw everything we had in our hand and ran as fast we could. We were fortunately not discovered.
Because of all this is a very memorable place for me and I will never forget this holiday because it is so special.
Love Louise Witt Gadkjær.
Svar #1
17. februar 2009 af Siljev (Slettet)
Først ville jeg skrive, I would like to tell you about my holiday ....
memorable place and the place means a lot to me. I stedet for at skrive det, så skriv, memorable place and it means a lot to me.
and one of the reasons is, i stedet for is skal du skrive are, da det er flertal, reasons.
and one more thing that impressed, and something else that impressed me, det lyder bedre.
mountains as we were surrounded by, det hedder mountains which we were surrounded by.
scents = føle og hedder sence
A very strange thing that also impressed, erstat that med which
and my mobile, and on my cell phone
It was an evening when we sat down on the beach and drink, but on Crete may you not drink on the beach because it is a public place, but we did it anyway, = There was an evening when we all went to the beach and had a lot of fun by drinking cocktails and chatting together. (nyt afsnit) On Crete it is illegal to drink on the beach beacause it is a public place, but we did it anyways.
and drink again, drank i stedet for drink, datid.
but we get agreed that, du skal ikke skrive get der.
in our hand, det hedder hands med s
Svar #3
17. februar 2009 af Isomorphician
"and one of the reasons is, i stedet for is skal du skrive are, da det er flertal, reasons."
....det er stadig kun én af grundene
Svar #4
17. februar 2009 af Wsof (Slettet)
skal jeg skrive sence ? istedet for scents ? .. den siger at man ikke kan skrive det
Svar #6
17. februar 2009 af Tamanna (Slettet)
Hallo there!
I’d like to tell about my holiday on Crete, because it’s an outstanding place which means a lot to me. There are many reasons for that; one of them is that it was the best holiday I’ve ever been on.
Since there aren’t many mountains in Denmark and since you’re not able to smell and feel the sea water at where I live, I found the giant mountains which we were surrounded by, very impressive and not to mention the scent of the sea water; no matter what direction you looked at, you could still see the water.
What also was amazing was their hospitality; I thought the local residents would be as unfriendly as Danes, but I was wrong; they were really nice and would love to help us with our needs such as shopping, translation and et cetera.
I’ve had many memorable experiences; the best one was to meet all those kind people.
We spent time together every day at the pool and we also had dinner together every single evening.
I also met two Norwegians and nine Danes and since then, I’ve kept in touch with them by MSN or cell phone.
One evening back in Crete, we were all sitting on the beach and drinking which by the way is not allowed since the beach is a public place; but we had being doing so almost every night. So anyway, everything went smoothly until the very last night. We were all sitting on the beach again and drinking as usual when the police came; they started shouting and we thought they were some random people, but as they came closer and closer, we discovered that they’re not random men, in fact police officers. We all panicked and tried to pack everything we had as fast as we could and started escaping. Luckily, they didn’t catch us.
And because of all this, the place will remain a memorable and special place and I don’t think I will ever forget that holiday.
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