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1. Apollo Hotel Apartments, Grivas DIghenis Ave, LArnaca, CYPRUS, Wednesday, MAy 11th, 1988, Mrs Jenny Hargreaves, 3, Birch Avenue, Salisbury, Wilts SB4 3RW, ENGLAND

Dear Mrs. Hargreaves,

This is to inform you that my husband James and i Have arrived without incident at our destinatio, LArnaca in Cyprus. The average max. daily temperature at present is 28 celcius, and the average sea temperature is 18. We therefore spend a considerable amount of time each day on the beach, where we swin adn lie in the sun. We judge the food served in restaurants here to be of a high standard, especially with regard to flavour, and also to be relatively expensive, Consequently, we dine out frequentlym despite the fact that our apartment has cooking facilities. I regret that James usually becomes slightly inebriated at meals, being unable to resist indulgence in the low-priced local wines and spiritus.

Yours sincerely, Freda G Finchley (Mrs)

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Wednesday

Dear Joe, Do you remember me ?, We had quite a long chat about six weeks ago when you dropped into our bookshop to order some stuff. Actually, you were a bit upset at the time about how little we'd got in stock and so on. I hope the Manager was able to explain everything to you alright ! Actually, one of the books you ordered has come at last! It's that one by Annie Raimes, called "Techniques in Teaching Writing", or something like that. Actually, Im afraid the price has gone up a bit. We tould you that i would cost £ 5,30, but theres been a new price list come out, and they've put it up to £ 7,75! Shocking, isn't it ? Well, I suppose thats inflation for you. So, any time you like to come in, the book will be waiting for you. Well, I say "any time", but actually you're supposed to come and get it during the next 2 weeks, otherwise we have to send it back again, which would be a same, really, considering. It will be wonderful to see you again when you come for the book.

All best wishes, Sandra.

Jeg håber der er nogen der kan hjælpe mig, for jeg stinker alvorlig meget til engelsk :/