Rettelse af engelsk abstract (10 linjer)

Jeg ved ikke, hvordan jeg retter mit indlæg, men jeg har tilføjet en passage mellem "to learn about alien countries." og "Collaborated with the film":

This paper explores what happens when two different cultures meet. Using the controversial film ”Babel”, which is based on the famous Bible story sharing the same name, the study investigates how prejudices are made. It also describes the phenomenon xenophobia which basicly means to have fear for the unknown. It is a biological self defense that our ancestors used when meeting a stranger. Today it is common to have a stereotypical view on foreign people, to judge them by default and without personal experience. This can be avoided by having an open mind and being ready to learn about alien countries. The paper also makes a comparative analysis about the social, economical and political conditions in the US and Mexico where the latter is dependent heavily on the former. Collaborated with the film, the paper concludes that our world is built dynamically; all actions affect everyone. Therefore we have to co-operate between the frontiers. It might be difficult due to our different languages and traditions but it is most important for the survival of Earth.

The  explores shows  what happens when two different cultures meet. Using the controversial film ”Babel”, which  based on the famous Bible story sharing the same name, the studying investigates how prejudices are made. It also describes the phenomenon xenophobia which basicly mean to have fear for the unknown. It is a biological self defense that our ancestors used when meeting a stranger. Today it is common to have a stereotypical view on foreign people, to judge them by default and without personal experiences. These can be avoided by having an open mind and being ready to learn about alien countries. Collaborated with the film, the paper concludes that our world is built dynamically; all actions affect everyone. Therefore we have to co-operate between the frontiers. It might be difficult due to our different languages and traditions but it is most important for the new generation on the earth.

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This paper explores what happens when two different cultures meet. Using the controversial film ”Babel”, which is based on the famous Bible story sharing the same name, the study investigates how prejudices are made. It also describes the phenomenon xenophobia, which  basically means to have fear of the unknown. It is a biological self-defense*) that our ancestors used when meeting strangers.

Today it is common to have a stereotypical view on foreign people, to judge them by default and without personal experience. This can be avoided by having an open mind and being ready to learn about alien countries. The paper also makes a comparative analysis about the social, economical and political conditions in the US and Mexico, where the latter is dependent heavily [ordstilling] on the former.

Collaborated with the film [ikke sikker på hvad du mener], the paper concludes that our world is built dynamically; all actions affect everyone. Therefore we have to co-operate between the frontiers. It might be difficult due to our different languages and traditions, but it is of the utmost importance for the survival of Earth.

Det er for sent nu, har afleveret den med de rettelser, Richard kom med. Jeg er dog ganske tilfreds med abstractet, men lad os nu se. Vi har fået at vide, at det ikke gør noget, at det engelske ikke er 100% korrekt.