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Rettelser med fed skrift, ting du skal genoverveje i kursiv

The beach was filled with happy people enjoying the sunshine. Suddenly cried someone [ordstilling] “beware the dog!” while pointing to an Alsatian that was rushing along the beach and frothing at the mouth.

The parents take care of the kids [nej, det står der vist ikke helt i originalteksten] who [verbum mangler] playing in the sand and headed for their cars. A lifeguard, who had seen it all, walked towards the people who followed [overvej udvidet præteritum (past continuous); komma foran who da det indleder parentetisk relativsætning] the dog with sticks and stones.

When they were catching [overvej pluperfektum (førdatid / past perfect) up with the dog, whose tongue [verbum mangler] now covered with sand as well, a little boy suddenly come [tempus] running in front of the dog. Everybody was terrified, but the boy whose [komma foran whose da det indleder parentetisk relativsætning] face was completely pale of fright, hugged the dog.

“Don’t hurt my dog,” he shouted [shouted er mere neutralt]. “It hasn’t done anything!” All the men, who now were [ordstilling] completely out of breath, tried to get the boy away from the dog, whose mouth was bigger than the boys [genitivform mangler] head. “But it is crazy!” [der er et bedre ord for denne kontekst; brug ordbogen] they cried.

“No,” the boy whimpered. “It has eaten our soap, and the only thing it wants is to get some of the water I have just fetched for it.” Those who had followed the dog got [overvej 'to get' vs 'to be'] very embarrassed which [komma foran which, da det indleder parentetisk relativsætning] was understandable.

Tusind tak :)

Nu har jeg rettet det jeg kunne:

The beach was filled with happy people who enjoying the sunshine. Suddenly cried someone "beware the dog!" while he pointing to an Alsatian that was rushing along the beach and frothing at the mouth. The parents caught on the kids who are playing in the sand and headed for their cars. A lifeguard, who had seen it all, walked towards the people, who followed the dog with sticks and stones. When they was catching up with the dog, whose is tongue now covered with sand as well, a little boy suddenly came running in front of the dog. Everybody was terrified, but the boy, whose face was completely pale of fright, hugged the dog. "Don't hurt my dog," he shouted. "It hasn't done anything!" All the men, who were now completely out of breath, tried to get the boy away from the dog, whose mouth was bigger than the boys head. "But it is fire!" they cried. "No," the boy whimpered. "It has eaten our soap, and the only thing it wants is to get some of the water I have just fetched for it." Those who had followed the dog get very embarrassed, which was understandable.

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who were enjoying the sunshine -- udvidet datid (past continuous) formes via to be + præs. part.

Suddenly someone cried -- (S + V, også hvis sætningen indledes af et adverbium)

while pointing to -- den er helt fin; da det var med fed skrift, var det en rettelse og ikke noget du skulle tænkere yderligere over

The parents grabbed their children, who were playing in the sand ... -- 'kids' er talesprog, med mindre du da omtaler dyreunger. Hvis du omtaler menneskebørn i en formel kontekst, som en skr. opgave jo er, bør du holde dig til 'children'

... a lifeguard, who had seen it all, walked towards the people, who had been following the dog

When they had almost caught up with the dog ...

Everyone was terrified -- lyder bedre end everybody, men jeg kan ikke forklare hvorfor

... but the boy, pale of fright, hugged the dog ...

"But it is rabid!"

Those who had followed the dog were embarrassed. --- hvis du partout vil bruge 'to get', så skal den sættes i præteritum; they got

Ups. Der er altid én man overser i farten;

was bigger than the boy's head --- husk genitivapostrof

Tusind tak for hjælpen, desuden var det en stor hjælp med dine forklarelser :)