Oversættelse til korrekt engelsk - meget gerne hurtige svar

as a mother for a group...

to the home, where these children .....

Hi er amerikansk

på engelsk hedder det   hey    

det var bare det, men væsentlig da det jo er engelsk det drejer sig om   

og måske     You ask me to write a letter.......  

ved nærlæsning:

explain why I want to.....

filled with.....

already read a little......

Hi  =  Hello

You would like me to write  =  You have asked me to write.............

explain why I will like to work as  =  explain why I thought I would like to work as.........

that came into my head was that it was a place I would like to work  =  that came into my head was:  "This is where I would enjoy working."

orphanage centre  =  orphanage

. And that was exactly what   = That was exactly what........  (Don't begin a new sentence after a full stop with "and")

what I had wished for  = what I had wished

organization  =  organisation  (organization er amerikansk, ikke engelsk)

and I became even more fill with enthusiasm = and I became even more enthusiastic

with an adult who functions as mother = with an adult, who functions as a mother (glem ikke kommaet her ! ")

a place for orphan children  = a place for orphaned  children   (-eller  "for orphans")

but it is a home. And in a home there is.......   = but it is a home, and in a home there is...........

as close to the home............   =  as close to the homes.......

For at du skal have skrevet i den rigtige stil, må du sige hvad slags brev det er, og til hvem det er skrevet.  Det har betydning for din indledning og din sluthilsen.