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Hjælp haster engelsk eksame
Hej.. Jeg skal til prøve imorgen i engelsk.. og jeg håber at nogen gider og læse, min engelsk og rette den lidt og tilføje nogle ting.. det vil være en stor hjælp :)
Tak på forhånd :D
Why did I choose this topic?
I have chosen to talk about the World Trade Center. I come from Turkey, where they are fighting against a terrorist organization called PKK, so I know little about terrorism. Two boys from my class has presented about the World Trade Center in English class and
showed a video that really changed my perspective, the United States. Since that day, I have studied it and tried to find out more about what happened that day and suddenly it became a hobby for me. I have also seen some movies that have changed much. "World Trade Center, United 93"
What is WTC?
World trade center were a big financial workplace for many people.
World Trade Center consisted of seven buildings, but the two famous buildings were twins Towers
They were built from 1966 to 1972 and designed by Minoru Yamasaki. The buildings consisted of 110 floors. height: 527.9 m.. World Trade Center was located in Central Plaza in New York
What happened on September the 11th 2001?
11 September 2001, four airplanes were kidnapped by 28 terrorists who used airplanes as bombs. 2 of flights were crashed into the twin towers. and one in the Pentagon and one crashed in a field. It is not the first time that World Trade Center was been under terrorist attacks in 1993, a bombe missed in the garage
Who did it and why?
Many people believe it was Al Qaeda that was behind the terrorist attack, but they have denied it and the 28 men who were involved have nothing to do with al-Qaeda mener de
Results and Consequences?.
The former præsentent sent American soldiers into Iraq after d 11 September 2001. 2750 is the death toll since 2007.
Svar #1
17. juni 2009 af TiiiA (Slettet)
hvis nogen der gider og sige hvorfor AL-qaeda gjor det?
tak :)
Svar #2
18. juni 2009 af m.halskov (Slettet)
Du bør måske også nævne hvilke konsekvenser det har haft for indenrigspolitikken i USA - f.eks. vedtagelsen af the Patriot Act.
Svar #3
18. juni 2009 af rakijovic
Som sædvanligt en udmærket timing fra spørgerens side. Kære Hatice, havde du sendt din forespørgsel lidt tidligere end kl. sengetid-for-de-fleste, eller i det mindste sagt hvornår du senest skal bruge vores feedback, ville du måske have fået svar.
Nu, kl. 11:35 på eksamensdagen, tror jeg imidlertid de fleste synes det er "lige meget". Men held og lykke ikke desto mindre...håber i det mindste du når at læse korrektur på dit oplæg (hvad er en "præsentent", fx?).
► Vriendelikheid is net sinisme wat 'n jol gekry het! ◄ |||| ► Ljubaznost je samo cinizam što je dobio piće! ◄ ||||
► Prietenia este doar cinism care a băut puțin alcool ! ◄
Svar #4
19. juni 2009 af why-hahaha-why (Slettet)
Hi,
It is to late for me to help you with your piece of writting. In addition to this, you should ask me to correct with your written.
I am Englsh writter and have been studying English more than four years at the Oxford University in the United Kingdom.
My name is Mehmet and I was born in Copenhagen in the capital city of Denmark, but my family resides in Turkey where they are originally from.
In your essay, there are quiet a lot of mistakes and the sentences are not so well as the langauge should be. Furdermore, you should include more details about the topic you have chosen. You are out of luck, I am afraid that you won't get a very good mark for this. Hopefully, you can be able to get a good mark.
Good luck with your piece of writting.
Do not hesitate to contact me by E - mail: " [email protected] " if you have any questions.
Best wishes,
Mehmet
Svar #5
19. juni 2009 af rakijovic
'I am an English writer'—however, being born in Denmark to Turkish parents I'd say your nationality is everything but English.
'For more than four years'—please note the preposition.
Copenhagen is not in the capital of Denmark. It is the capital of Denmark. Ergo, either comma after Copenhagen, and to kill off ambiguity altogether you might want to try, ''(...) in Copenhagen, the capital of Denmark.'
'Can be able'—no, not quite. In this context one'd prefer, 'will be able' or just simple future; 'will receive a good mark'. 'Can' and 'be able to' could be paired in, say, Shakespeare's day, but the modal system has since developed, making such a construction tautologous at best. While in the USA 'can[not] be able to' abounds in spoken English (and frequently appears in written standard English, school teachers condemn the form.
I'd rejig, 'the sentences are not so well as the langauge [sic] should be', to 'some of the wording in your sentences is a bit off / leaves a bit to be desired.'
Please note the difference between 'quite' [kwait] (adjective) and 'quiet' [kwajõt] (adverb). The former rhymes with 'bite', the latter with 'riot'.
Also please note the correct spelling of write / writer / writing, English, furthermore, language, and remember the difference between 'to' (preposition as well as infinitive marker) with 'too' (adverb).
► Vriendelikheid is net sinisme wat 'n jol gekry het! ◄ |||| ► Ljubaznost je samo cinizam što je dobio piće! ◄ ||||
► Prietenia este doar cinism care a băut puțin alcool ! ◄
Svar #7
19. juni 2009 af rakijovic
Bare nogle rettelser til Mehmets indlæg. Hans engelsk er heller ikke fritaget for skønhedsfejl. ;)
► Vriendelikheid is net sinisme wat 'n jol gekry het! ◄ |||| ► Ljubaznost je samo cinizam što je dobio piće! ◄ ||||
► Prietenia este doar cinism care a băut puțin alcool ! ◄
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