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Nogen der vil rette min engelsk stil??
Ville blive glad hvis der nogen der ville rette min engelsk stil, som er skrevet på under en side :)
Svar #2
15. september 2009 af mathheadinclouds (Slettet)
and ended after _the_ second world war
Italy was hit _by_ huge economic crises
still discussed by historians (no "the")
Abyssinia (no "n")
(there are some more errors)
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Svar #3
15. september 2009 af elissa92
okay thanks.. but can you continue a little bit to tell me more of the errors, because i have to deliver it tomorrow? :)
Svar #4
15. september 2009 af mathheadinclouds (Slettet)
consolidate the _imperium_ (imperial is the adjective)
overtake the horn of Africa entirely
no comma after Somalia, but after Sudan
protected _by_ Britain
and so his way was blocked
_The_ United Kingdom blocked his access
to _the_ Mediterranean
fleet had _its_ main base
Sicily
"It was just to compel it and to pull out" - det forstå jeg ikke. Hvad er "it"?
_Italy_ would have _the_ control
"The British top future" - det forstå jeg ikke.
territories
Svar #5
15. september 2009 af mathheadinclouds (Slettet)
overtake the horn of Africa entirely OR
overtake the entire horn of Africa
overtake the horn of Africa in its entirety
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