Hjælp til engelsk grammatik.

Er der nogen speciel årsag til at du skriver "gone, dead, gone forever now" ?

Fordi hans kone er død.

Ja da, så meget forstod jeg :) Jeg tænkte bare på, om lige netop den sætning bliver brugt i selve historien, altså om det er vigtigt, at du bruger sætningen. For jeg ville nok sige, at det virke lidt overflødigt at bruge den to gange.

Jeg har forresten rettet, men nogle sætninger er lidt svære at hitte ud af, da jeg ikke selv kender historien.

PS. Det kan godt være jeg har omformuleret lidt for meget. Men her har du i al fald et bud.

Hej Anneline

Først og fremmest, samme spørgsmål som Barbasaurus. Mener du noget specielt med dette?

Her er så nogle rettelser til dig, som jeg håber, du kan bruge:

After Delroy has got the change to leave Karn and Wilby at the police station, he still cannot understand that his wife has gone, dead, gone forever now. He can’t imagine how his life, let alone his three childrens' lives are going to be now. How is he going to take care of all those things Georgina took care of.
He doesn’t know how to tell the children that their mother has gone, dead, gone forever and that they will never see her again.
That is all he thinks about on his way home, even though it is a very short way. But in 5 minutes a lot of thoughts have run through his head. 
At home, however, he decides that it is not fair towards his wife that the police think that her loving husband has killd her. By that thought Delroy decides to call the social service and tell them how Karn and Wilby treated him. Tell them that even though they had no evidence, they used both physical and psychological violence against him, when he was innocent at last.
Delroy gets a compensation of 10.000 pounds, because of all the things he has been through with Karn and Wilby.
The social service proposes that Delroy should use some of the money at a psychologist for himself and the children, because if they choose not to do so, he and the children will have permanent ill-effects from the loss of Georgina, their mother and wife.

Mange tak for hjælpen. Det bare fordi at hans kone er død, også har jeg bare prøvet t remse flere ord op der beskriver at hun er død, væk og borte.