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hej, jeg ville høre om der ikke er en som gider rette den her lille tekst, jeg skal nemlig bruge den til fremlæggelse (:
Bullying is a very growing problem in Denmark, but of course not just in Denmark, but almost everywhere in the world. Bullying exists everywhere, in schools, offices and so on. In the last couple of years the problem has grown bigger, the number of children who kill themselves gets higher. We have to do something when we still can bully just ruin the child or teen’s life. Bullying really cause long-term problems for the victims.
Sometimes the people who bullies will pick on people bigger or smaller than their size, bullies hurt people verbally and physically. There are many reasons for that. One of them is because the bullies themselves are or have been the victim of bullying. Others just want attention or things, and then there are the people who just bully others because they are afraid that they will be the next one who gets bullied
- tusind tak på forhånd (:
Svar #1
02. oktober 2009 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)
Her er lidt til overvejelse (forkert eller ændret), det i parentes bør ændres.
Bullying is a steady growing problem in Denmark, but of course not just in Denmark, but almost everywhere in the world. Bullying exists everywhere, in schools, offices and so on. In the last couple of years the problem has grown bigger, the number of children who kill themselves gets higher. We have to do something (when we still can bully just ruin the child) or teen’s life. Bullying really cause long-term problems for the victims.
Sometimes the people who bullies will pick on people (who are) bigger, less smart or smaller than their size, bullies hurt people verbally and physically. There are many reasons for that. One of them is because the bullies themselves are or have been the victim of bullying. Others just want attention or things, and then there are the people who just bully others because they are afraid that they will be the next one who gets bullied
Svar #2
02. oktober 2009 af Stygotius
mon vi nu ikke skulle skrive "steadily" ????
Drop det allerførste "but"
man skriver ikke "and so on", men "etc."
Der skal et "and" før "the number of children"
"gets higher" er ikke godt. Skriv "is rising" eller "on the increase"
Mon der nu ikke skulle et punktum mellem "still can" og så et stort begyndelsesbogstav i "Bully just ruin.."(som skal være (Bullying just ruins.......")
"Bullying really causes.......
"Sometimes people who bully....." (Det er dog flertal)
Ikke så godt med "smaller" om personer, men snarere "shorter"
Teksten er som helhed i ret dårligt engelsk.
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