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01. november 2009 af heleneBirch (Slettet) - Niveau: B-niveau

hej, nogle som vil være søde at rette det her lille stykke igennem, da det skal bruges til en fremlæggelse. (:
- synes det lidt svært at se sine egne fejl, så det vil være skønt hvis der en som vil rette den igennem.

Many Americans has said that they feel more secure when they have a gun, but I just think it’s an illusion of safety. The gun laws in the United States vary from state to state, but almost every American can buy a gun without a permit, a waiting period or an identity check. This effectively means anyone over 18 can get a gun. Because of that especially schools shootings are increasing, it’s so easy for a child or student to take a gun to school.
The gun laws in Denmark are very different from the laws in the United Stat.
People cannot just buy a gun by the bank, or buy cartridges at the hairdresser.
I think it’s one of the reasons why there are that many accidents caused by guns in the united stat.
In Denmark is the number of accidents caused by guns very low. The biggest problems we have are the many gangs, especially in Copenhagen. They shout each other and sometimes innocent people on the streets.
I think guns are so important for Americans, because Weapons are a symbol of American freedom and self-destruction and also because they do not trust the police; almost every American child has grown up with a gun in their home. They have learned to protect themselves and their family.
They see a gun as a thing, which can protect their family. They close their eyes for all the bad things guns causes.

-tusind tusind tak på forhånd.


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01. november 2009 af ramuk (Slettet)

- ...but almost every American can buy a gun without a permission...

- Because of that, especially schools shootings are increasing (komma efter that)

- Det ville lyde bedre hvis der stod: ...I think it’s one of the reasons why there are so many accidents caused by guns in the United States. (United States)

- In Denmark is the number of accidents caused by guns very low (sætningen skal lyde sådan her):

In Denmark the number of accidents caused by guns are very low.

- I think guns are so important for Americans, because weapons are a (weapons med lille " w " )

-- Sådan:)


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01. november 2009 af heleneBirch (Slettet)

tusind tak :')


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02. november 2009 af thostrup16 (Slettet)

Det hedder permit, ikke permission, så du havde ret i første omgang.


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