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Rettelse af tekst?Har virkelig brug for hjælp
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I believe that the strongest Thema in the story is respect.
For I believe that you must have great respect for his parents. If you do not respect to them, then it is hard to have the same opinions. If you do not respect them you can not understand them and they do not understand one self. I think that if you show respect towards them so you get the same from them.
For a father, children are always small. Man is never great. I think that's what Roger can not accept in history. He is afraid that she has suddenly become a large and young girl. It is the fear of losing her to make him afraid. But he makes the right choice at the end. I understand him well. For I believe it is the same as my own father does. He sees me as a little girl who never grows up. He will do everything to protect me and I am also grateful. But sometimes it may be too much. When will somewhere so he gets nervous. I remember the first day I was at work. There were 10 minnutter for we were close and so come my father. I asked him why he had come and he replied that he would pick me up. When I asked him to go home he went. But when I had free and wanted to leave home he waited out front.
Of course it is nice that he will protect me. But it may be too much. I do not know if I would have done the same thing to my children.
Overall, I thought it was a good story. It was a good story because the father reacted as he did. It was a really good offense. I hope all fathers think such as their "small" daughters can be proud of them. I think father seemed very logical because he thinks that his daughters should not be embarrassed over him. a really good idea.
Svar #6
05. november 2009 af Merit-HB (Slettet)
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Hej derude...
er der nogle der gider at rette denne tekst til mig? Det er kun en del af selve teksten..
I believe that the strongest Theme in the story is respect.
For(Sig Because i stedet, For lyder mærkeligt, meget ophøjet) I believe that you must have great respect for his parents. If you do not respect to them, then it is hard to have the same opinions. If you do not respect them you can not understand them and they do not understand Themselves. I think that if you show respect towards them then you get the same from them.
For a father, children are always small. Man is never great(Den her sætning giver ikke mening, hvad prøver du at sige med den sætning?). I think that's what Roger can not accept in history(Mener du ikke This story i stedet for History som lyder som om du mener verdens historien når du siger "in history"). He is afraid that she has suddenly become a large(Large kan kun bruges om fysisk størrelse, hvis du mener at pigen er ved at blive voksen så sig that she has developed into a big young girl, eller developed into an independant young girl) and young girl. It is the fear of losing her that makes him afraid. But he makes the right choice at the end. I understand him well. For I believe it is the same as my own father does. He sees me as a little girl who never grows up. He will do everything to protect me and I am also grateful. But sometimes it can be too much. When will somewhere so he gets nervous(Den her sætning giver ikke mening, der står bogstaveligt talt "Når vil et sted hen så bliver han nervøs"). I remember the first day I was at work. There were 10 minnutes before we were closed and then my father came. I asked him why he had come and he replied that he would pick me up. When I asked him to go home he went. But when I got off from work and wanted to leave for home he waited out front.
Of course it is nice that he will protect me. But it can become too much. I do not know if I would have done the same thing to my children.
Overall, I thought it was a good story. It was a good story because the father reacted as he did. It was a really good offense(dette giver ikke mening, det betyder "Det var en rigtig god krænkelse", hvis du mener af en fejl og være var det forståeligt og du har medfølelse med ham så sig "It was a mistake that i could really empathize with"). I hope all fathers think such as their "small" daughters can be proud of them. I think the father seemed very logical because he thinks that his daughters should not be embarrassed over him. a really good idea.
Der er nogen gange hvor jeg har rettet lidt i blinde fordi dine sætninger er somend ganske fine, men du er meget kortfattet og for kortfattet til det punkt hvor der mangler et ord og jeg skal gætte dine tanker, uddyb lidt mere af og til og så er du bare godt i gang.
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