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hjæææææææælp med engelsk
hej jég har virkelig brug for hjælp, da jeg ikke rigtig kan se mine egne fejl.
vil det være skønt hvis der var en som gad og kigge min korte tekst igennem (:
I do not understand why they have stricter laws against stealing or violence than shooting someone. It does not make sense.
I think America is a very insecure society compared to Denmark’s society.
They do not try to find a way to stop accidents caused by guns. They know it’s because of the easy access to guns and lethal weapons, but they are still not doing anything about this rising problem.
Like I have tried to explain, I truly think guns are a bigger issue in America in it is in Denmark.
We Danish people believe in our system, Americans does not.
tusind tak på forhånd (:
( ps hedder det americans live eller lives?)
Svar #1
11. november 2009 af Carinapc (Slettet)
linje 6: I truly think guns are a bigger problem in America than it is in Denmark.
Svar #2
11. november 2009 af julia92 (Slettet)
We Danish people believe in our system, Americans do not.
Americans = plural
Svar #3
11. november 2009 af heleneBirch (Slettet)
americans skal det være uden s til sidst?
- og kan ikke rigtig finde fejlen i linje 6?
Svar #4
11. november 2009 af Carinapc (Slettet)
Du har skrevet: I truly think guns are a bigger issue in America in it is in Denmark.
Det skal istedet være: I truly think guns are a bigger problem in America than it is in Denmark
in rettets til than
Svar #5
11. november 2009 af exatb
I do not understand why they have stricter laws against penalties for offences like stealing or and violence than for shooting someone. It does not make sense.
I think America is a very insecure society compared to the Danish society Denmark’s society.
They do not try to find a way to stop the accidents caused by guns. They know it’s because of the easy access to guns and lethal weapons, but they are still not doing anything about this rising problem.
Like I have tried to explain, I truly think that guns are is a bigger issue problem in America in than it is in Denmark.
We, the Danish people, believe in our system, Americans don´t.does not.
Svar #8
11. november 2009 af Stygotius (Slettet)
"Stricter laws on........" er vældigt godt !!
"Like I have tried." er amerikansk
"As I have tried" er engelsk
compared to the Danish (society)
stop the accidents (menes der virkelig "accidents" ??) caused by guns
They know (it’s because of) they are caused by the easy access to guns and (lethal) deadly weapons,
I (truly) sincerely think that guns are (is) are a bigger issue problem
We(, the Danish people,) Danes believe in......
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