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He claims that(At) on a hot summerday, people with heart problems (will) are dying (die of) from heatstrokes(, he argues,) and in the future the population will end up suffering (of) from poisoning diseases as a result (ing from) of pollution, and in the end the pollution will pass (t) away forever.
The last few years, overheating in connection with airpollution has(ve the last few years) developed into a serious problem, which has (claimed)caused that some elderly people have died. The larger cities cannot get rid of the solar heat form from all the asphalt and concrete areas, and at in that way the temperature may actually rise to 50 degrees in side the shade shadow. under unfavorable circumstances there will be formed a layer around about 100 meters above the city, and the the extremely polluted air is therefore prevented from disappearing.
Noise pollution has increased (itakt) due to with the increasing number of traffic. For example, the volume of the cities in during the 10 years between 1960 and 1970 increased by an average decubel of 30 per cent every year, which means a roughly fordoblingaf a doubling of noise every three years. This results in partly ear damage, partly mental damage such as fatigue, depression and loss of concentration. What can be done about it? The public transport must be increased at the expense of private cars, if whose exhaust is are among the worst causes of pollution. The air would also be mush much more clean, if private oil burner was abolished, and and established district or electric heating everywhere. And finally, it must be behind the establishment, is the researcher ending, that is the least polluting energy source.(De sidste par linier forstår jeg ikke)