Hjælp - Engelsk rettelse for 7. klasse

The story begins with an old coachman following a girl and her parents to a seaside hotel and their luggage was on top of his coach.

Altså, denne her coachman fulgte pigen og hendes forældre til hotellet og deres bagage var oven på hans coach?

The coachman said to Sophie; "if you’re not careful you’ll soon meet the ghost rider".

When Sophie went to the sea (eller hvis det er en strand, er det beach), she could see some men with straw hats and bathing suits and ladies with parasols.

She met a boy who saved her life. The boy said that he would meet her at night. It was a windy day. She was going to meet the boy. His name was Henry. Henry would tell Sophie the truth about The Ghost Rider. When they were on the way Henry told Sophie about The Ghost Rider. Henry also told her that The Ghost Rider had a pony-tail and a funny hat like the ones they had in the old days. When they were at the beach they saw a man who looked just like The Ghost Rider. He rode a horse and he had a lamp with him. Sophie and Henry were hidden in the grass. The man who looked like The Ghost Rider came in front them. He was scary but not a ghost rider. He was the wreck-master.The next day they could see a lot of ships on the coast. They went/got on a ship and they found a yellow glove. All the fishermen had the yellow gloves. Henry and Sophie went home because they could not understand what had happened. Sophie is sleeping and suddenly dreashe dreams about The Ghost Rider. So the next day they go to the wreck-master and tell him about it. He could not help them and suddenly transforms her to The Ghost Rider (forvandler han hende, eller forvandler hun sig pludseligt? hvis hun pludseligt forvandler sig ville det være;... and suddenly she transforms into The Ghost Rider) . The story ends with the ghost rider riding away on his horse.

 Det er en meget "let" rettelse. Jeg har forsøgt på ikke at ændre dit originale for meget.

alternativt;

The story begins with an old coachman following a girl and her parents to a seaside hotel, with their luggage on top of his coach.

The coachman said to Sophie; "if you’re not careful you’ll soon meet the ghost rider".

When Sophie went to the sea, she could see some men with straw hats and bathing suits and ladies with parasols.

She met a boy who saved her life. The boy said that he would meet her at night. It was a windy day.

She was going to meet the boy. His name was Henry. Henry wanted to tell Sophie the truth about The Ghost Rider. When they were on their way, Henry told Sophie about The Ghost Rider. Henry also told her that The Ghost Rider had a pony-tail and a funny hat like the ones they had in the old days.

When they were at the beach they saw a man who looked just like The Ghost Rider. He rode a horse and he had a lamp with him. Sophie and Henry hid in the grass. The man who looked like The Ghost Rider appeared in front them. He was scary but not a ghost rider. He was the wreck-master.

The next day they could see a lot of ships on the coast. They got on a ship where they found a yellow glove. All the fishermen had the yellow gloves. Henry and Sophie went home because they couldn't understand what had happened. 

When Sophie is sleeping, she suddenly dreams about The Ghost Rider, so the next day they visit to the wreck-master to tell him about it. He couldn't help them and suddenly transforms her to The Ghost Rider/and suddenly she transforms into The Ghost Rider). The story ends with the ghost rider riding away on his horse.

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When Sophie was sleeping, she suddenly dreamt about The Ghost Rider, so the next day they went visit to the wreck-master to tell him about it. He couldn't help them and suddenly transformed her into The Ghost Rider/and suddenly she transformed into The Ghost Rider. The story ended with the ghost rider riding away on his horse

Tusind Tak Mia, det var meget sødt af dig at rette den så godt iggennem. (: Men hvilken synes du jeg skal bruge af de tre du har rettet?