Engelsk Aflevering!!

Jeg har en engelsk afl. for, og jeg har lavet den

Jeg ville bare lige få det rettet, er der ikke lige nogen der kan rette den.

Håber at i kan, fordi jeg skal aflevere den senest d. 05-01-10

Det handler om en dame som bor alene. Hun er 28 år, og hun har ingen mor og far. Så går hun ud for at shoppe, efter at hun har shoppet, går hun hjem og ser alt det rod. Ur og ringe og alle smykker er blevet stjålet. så ringede hun til politi, og de sagde at de nok skulle finde gerningmanden. Så efter 4 dages tid, kom damen ind til politi stationet, og der stod tyven. Og så måtte hun få en lille snak med tyven, hvorfor han gjorde det, hvad grunden var.

Jeg håber sandsygeligvis, at i kan hjælpe mig :)

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I stand up and i took my clothes and pants. I went across to room, and I opened windows. It was morning. I ate breat 4

pieces. After it, i took my jacket and went out to shopping. There was many people as also must shopping. I went to the

café and I eat a cake. And after it, I went home. Suddently opened I the door and I saw my odds and ends was root. Oh

my god, there has been a thief in here. My ring and watch became stealing. The thief has taken all. I called to police.

After 5 minute came police and he said to my, if I knew who the thief was. I was both afraid and tired. So I replied that I

did not which who the thief was. The police also said:” We shall find the offender whitin 4 days, and it laws the police.

And I said: “ I hopes that you can find him”.

Days went on and on and I was so afraid that the thief would come again. After 4 days, phoned the police to me and

said that they had found the thief. I was really delighted. I took my jacket and closed the door. I biked up to the police

station. I laid my bike and went in. I knocked on, and I went in. Police said:” Two policemen to get him in here, so that

you can have a little talking with the thief why he had stolen your things”. Suddently came two policemen with the thief.

He was very thin. He was pale in the face just because he was probably afraid for me.” Why have you stolen my things?

Why did you do that, and what is you name? The thief said:” I´m 17 years old, and I have not a mother and father. I live

alone, I have not friends and my name is Jack.