Engelsk - oversættelse

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Er der nogen der gider rette min oversættelse?

Ifølge en videnskabelig undersøgelse af børns læsefærdighed i 25 lande, inklusive lande i den tredje verden, er danske børn blandt de dårligste læsere i verden.
Især de 9-årige har store problemer. Men selv de 14-årige danske elever klarer sig dårligere end eleverne i de lande i Europa, vi normalt sammenligner os med, på trods af at de danske skoleelever har haft samme muligheder.
Problemet er især læsehastigheden. Hvis skoleeleverne ikke lærer at læse hurtigere og mere flydende, før de er 14, går de ikke alene glip af væsentlige oplevelser, men de risikerer også at få vanskeligheder med at gennemføre deres uddannelse.


According to a scientific examination/survey of children’s reading proficiency in 25 countries, including countries in the 3rd world, Danish children are among the worst readers in the world.
Especially the nine-year-old have big problems. But even the fourteen-year-old Danish students manage worse than students in those countries in Europe; we normally compare ourselves with, in spite of the Danish schoolchildren have had the same opportunities.
The problem is especially the reading speed. If the schoolchildren don’t learn to read faster and more fluently, before they are 14, not only are they going to miss considerable experiences, but they are also going to risk getting difficulties with completing their education.

Hilsen Maria