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Hjælp til gramatik_ og stavefejl evt. sproge.
Hjælp til gramatik_ og stavefejl evt. sprogefejl. TAK :D
Home & Office Computer Serviices Ltd
47 Withdean Cresscent
Brighton
BN1 6WG
St. Cecilia,s Wandsworth 19.01.10
Sutherland Grovve
London
SW18 5JR
Dear St. Cecilia,s
We at Home & Office Computer Serviices Ltd. Finde your new innovation a very good idea. We have seen your article, about your school in the newspaper " The Sunday Time" We like to support your idea, by giving you some good offers, for your school and its IT system. I have seen in the newspaper that your school spends a lot of money on the unused system every year. Arund 150.000 pound, therefore I would like to give you a bette offer. We at Home & Office Computer Services Ltd can offer you a brand new safety system plus update computers and a week corse for all your teachers for about 90.000 pounds a year. We at Home & Office Computer Serviices Ltd, would be pleased if we could arrange a meeting to dicos this and to talk about futher business. We want your school to continue in this way, we are sure that weth our help the school will rech a better and more higher technology way than befor.
We look forward to hearing from you
Yours faithfully
Nico Haidari
Home & Office Computer Serviices Ltd
47 Withdean Cresscent
Brighton
BN1 6WG
Svar #1
24. januar 2010 af Mac3 (Slettet)
We at Home & Office Computer Serviices Ltd. Finde your new innovation a very good idea. We have seen your article, about your school in the newspaper " The Sunday Time" We like to support your idea, by giving you some good offers, for your school and its IT system. I have seen in the newspaper that your school spends a lot of money on the unused system every year. Arund 150.000 pound, therefore I would like to give you a bette offer. We at Home & Office Computer Services Ltd can offer you a brand new safety system plus update computers and a week corse for all your teachers for about 90.000 pounds a year. We at Home & Office Computer Serviices Ltd, would be pleased if we could arrange a meeting to dicos this and to talk about futher business. We want your school to continue in this way, we are sure that weth our help the school will rech a better and more higher technology way than befor.
We look forward to hearing from you
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