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The movie is about an 11 year old girl, Coraline. Coraline has found a secret door in her new house, where sie just moved in with her parents Mel Jones and Charlie Jones. When Coraline walks through the secret door, she discovers another edition of her normal life. On the surface similar to this parallel reality creepy much her normal life. This parallel life is just much better. Coralines parents in the other world are not busy by work, so they give Coraline alot of attention. But when this strange and wonderful world takes a dangerous rotation, and her Other Mother tries to keep her forever, Coraline may trust her stubborn determination, her courage, help from the neighbours and a talking black cat to safe her normal parents and some ghost kids, so Coraline can go back to her normal life again.
Coraline Jones:
Coraline is an brave, smart, curious and an independent 11-year old explorer. She is angry at the adults, because they dont take Coraline serious for her young age and thermal behavior, and people are also confusing her name Coraline with Caroline.
Mel Jones:
Mel Jones is Coralines busy mom and the more attention Other Mother. Coralines normal mother are very busy by written garden-catalog. Mel Jones is the chef in the family, she is the person who keeps track of the family. The mother loves her daughter, but she is very buy and is not always giving Coraline that attention Coraline want by her mother. The Other Mother is the villain because she create the Other World and all the Residents in it. The Other Mother has described as the “perfect mother” because her cook and is giving Coraline all the attention she need, but the Other Mother is by the 3 ghost-children described as “The Witch”
Charlie Jones:
Charlie Jones is Coralines father, and the Other Father. Coralines normal father havent any time for Coraline, because he works all the time. The Other Father is a musical person and a gardener. Later in the movie he get a pumpkinlook-creatur of the Other Mother, because he talks to much with Coraline.
Svar #1
02. februar 2010 af Lisa3y (Slettet)
The movie is about an 11 year old girl, Coraline. Coraline has found a secret door in her new house where she just moved in with her parents Mel Jones and Charlie Jones. When Coraline walks through the secret door she discovers another edition of her normal life. On the surface similar to this parallel reality creepy much her normal life (Hvad menes der her???). This parallel life is just much better. Coraline's parents in the other world are not busy working so they give Coraline a lot of attention. But when this strange and wonderful world makes a dangerous twist and her other mother tries to keep her to stay forever. Coraline must trust her stubborn determination, her courage, help from the neighbours and a talking black cat to safe her normal parents and some ghost kids so Coraline can go back to her normal life again.
Coraline Jones:
Coraline is a brave, smart, curious and independent 11-year old explorer. She is angry at the adults because they don't take Coraline serious because of her young age and thermal behavior, and people are also confusing her name Coraline with Caroline.
Mel Jones:
Mel Jones is Coraline's busy mom and the more attentive other mother. Coraline's original mother is very busy writing garden catalogues. Mel Jones is the chef in the family. She is the person who keeps track of the family. The mother loves her daughter but she is very busy and is not always giving Coraline the attention Coraline wants from her mother. The other mother is the villain because she creates the other world and all the residents in it. The other mother is described as the “perfect mother” because of her cooking and the fact that she is giving Coraline all the attention she needs but the other mother is by the three ghost children described as “The Witch”
Charlie Jones:
Charlie Jones is Coralines father and the other father. Coralines original father haven't got any time for Coraline because he works all the time. The other father is a musical person and a gardener. Later in the movie he gets a pumpkinlooking creature of the other mother because he talks to much with Coraline.
OBS!: Du skal være meget påpasselig på dine bøjninger af verber. Husk at 3. person ental skal have et "s" på verbet. Og læs gerne lidt ekstra på lektien om kommaregler. Engelsk komma ligner langtfra det danske.
Svar #2
03. februar 2010 af Stygotius (Slettet)
På de første 8 linjer har du brugt ordet "Caroline" 7 gange. Det er utroligt klodset. Har du aldrig lært at bruge stedord ?
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