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Hjælp til få grammatik fejl i min engelsk opgave
hej jeg vil ikke have i retter det ligeud men fortæller hvad jeg laver fejl i, fx en eksempel i kan skrive jeg laver fejl i navneord. så jeg selv kan rette dem og lære min fejl så jeg ikke gøre det samme fejl igen, men det er jer der bestemmer hvordan i vil hjælpe mig
Describe what X-Factor is and why it has been so popular
The X Factor is a popular song contest, The X Factor like Popstars, Popstars is also popular song contest. It was Simon Cowell who found to do The X Factor. The X Factor is divided on three categories: 15-24 years, 25 years or older, and groups. In The X Factor it is three judges. He or she should sing for the judges to enroll in The X Factor, he or she enrolls in The X factor, if two or three judges like him or her voice. Every judge has a button to a big x, when a judge press the button the big x lights red, when all judges has pressed the button and all the big x lights red, he or she stop with sing. The judges choose the best 10 competitor in every category after all people have enrolled in The X Factor, so there are 30 competitors left. The three judges get a categories each, every judge choose the best 3 competitor in their categories, so there are 9 competitor left. The 9 competitor sing to the tree judges and to the audience, after all competitor has sing people send a text message to the competitor they think sings well. The 2 competitor there has get smallest text massages sing again to the tree judges and to the audience and every judge say which of the 2 competitor they will have not go out from The X Factor, and the competitor the judges can not like go out from The X Factor, so there are 8 competitor left and it the same happens to there are 2 competitor left. It called final when there are 2 competitors left, in final sing every competitor 3 songs, people send text massage to him or her they will have there win The X Factor. The winner gets a record deal. The X Factor has been so popular, because many people watch The X Factor, it’s funny and entertaining, many people there can sing and many people like to hear other people sing and The X Factor are in 23 countries.
Svar #1
02. marts 2010 af Bardhileyblood (Slettet)
Ville foretrække at rette din stil ordret, men okay, hvis du selv vil.
1. Du skal ikke bruge artiklen 'THE' foran et propium (egenavn). F. eks. er X-Factor et egenavn.
2. Du bytter om på has og is i din historie.
3. Lad vær med at skrive stammen af et ord, når -ing endelsen skal være der. F. eks. hedder det ikke stop sing, men 'stop singING'. Eller he should stop singing, hvis det er det du mener.
4. Du bytter om på tiderne. F.eks. skal 'has sing' hede 'has sung'.
5. Kan få øje på nogle danismer (der, hvor du oversætter direkte fra dansk til engelsk. ) nogle steder. Prøv og se om du ikke selv kan rette dem, så det bliver smukt engelsk.
6. Der mangler verballed (bolle) en eller flere steder.
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