Rettelse af en lille smule engelsk :P plz

Rettelser og mindre gode ord og vendinger med fed skrift, det lyder i øvrigt for mig som et forsøg på selvhævdelse (temaet) som en reaktion på de personens dårlige sociale vilkår

Skinhead is a story about a young boy, Jim Hawkins, who lives in an ordinary working-class area. He joins a gang and thinks he receives the respect and satisfaction, by violence.
Skinhead takes place in Plaistow, London’s EastEnd, in a working-class area. Joe doesn’t like his neighborhood, because he thinks that it is characterized by its normality and the persons living there. As written in line 7-8 on page 1: “Plaistow and its dirt were not for Joe. One day, he would move away and never return.” Joe simply hates the place he lives and he believes that it will succeed him one day to move. But it requires money and social position which he doesn’t have. Joe hates her mother WHOSE MOTHER? YOU PROBABLY MEAN HIS MOTHER

 as much as he hates the place where he lives. But although he is a gang member so he still obeys his mother as he was a little boy. When Joe smashes a person he imagines perhaps that it is his mother. As you can read on line 38 on page 1: ”Pleasant dreams flooded his mind – and, he saw his hand streaking down, the cosh a blur as it slashed across her cheek..” He wished he had courage enough to smash his own mother. He has not enough courage to confront his mother, who can also be read on line 37 on page 1: “…Wishing to hell he could get enough courage to use it on her.” Joe’s mother is a tuff woman who had to fight for everything she has achieved in life. So that makes her suspicious to everyone including Joe, who she treats violence in order to get what she wants. Joe’s father is a working-class man who according to Joe has never tried to get a better position in society. According to Joe, his father a soft touch who has never tried hard enough and it's something Joe can’t stand for. Line 7-8 on page 1: “Plaistow and its dirt were not for Joe. One day, he would move away and never return” may also mean that Joe is afraid of ending up like his father. And the fact that everyone around him begins to settle down, scares him.
Joe and his friends believe that they must regain London because they are the native people who have lost control over their London. It's their territory and you can read that on line 15 on page 2: “The Cockney had lost control over his London.” Joe believes that anyone can gain control of London if the person has “… a gun, a cosh, an army of thugs.”
Through violence achieves Joe that people are afraid of him, and this gives him power over them. That he loves and you can see it at the end of the story: “He was whistling when he strolled down to… soon, they would be ready for aggro.”
The conclusion is that I think that the theme of the story is fear. The reason for the way Joe is behaving, and the reason that he at all was a skinhead, is that he will not end up like his father and all the other losers in his neighborhood. The only person in the story he fears is his mother, and that is why he has not broken her yet. WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY "BROKEN HER"

She makes him feel insecure. Nor do I believe that it will happen, because her mother never going to change because of what she has encountered throughout her life.
 

Tak Erik, :D jeg elsker dig :D