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 Hej Mads. Det afhænger af, hvornår du skal bruge det. Jeg kan nok først kigge på det i aften, hvis det da er i orden?

Hilsen Mathias. :^)

det er fint nok jeg skal først bruge det til på mandag

 Er det bare det der står øverst som skal rettes? :^)

JEP:)

er du igang med at rette den spørge bare:)

 Hej. Er lige kommet hjem. Kigger på det nu. :^)

 Hi I would like to tell you how my trip went with my class and how it was to be on Jack the Ripper walk. Our guide showed us how Jack the Ripper walked around here and also showed how people died too. He also showed us around where the prostitute went over and found himself. One of the sides was a cemetery where one of the dead prostitute lay. Our guide told us about why it was right here and what was happened. I can also remember how he took us to a street where almost certainly no people walked past. One of the five prostitutes, the one that was killed again he showed us some pictures how she looked after she was killed. When I saw the pictures I thought, “How crazy is Jack the Ripper corpses!” Our guide showed us around various locations in London's streets as they have never seen before. After the tour was finished you will probably think fortunately we finished this trip here and you will never see those pictures our guide showed us again!

Jeg håber denne rettelse er bedre. Ellers må der også lige være nogle andre som kigger på den,

Hilsen Mathias. :^)

Den er rigtig fint rettelse tak for hjælpen Mathias.

En del fejl i teksten.

Der er ikke noget der hedder, "what was happened." -> what had happened

Den her sætning gir ingen mening.

"He also showed us around where the prostitute went over and found himself."

Den her skal rettes.

"where almost certainly no people walked past"