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Rettelse af KORT engelsk opgave.
Task 6 – Write a paragraph (about 150 words) in which you argue for a wider selection of food in your school canteen. State your main point in the first sentence and signpost your supporting arguments with appropriate linkers.
First I want to say that in our school canteen, there is bigger variety of pork than beef. I think it is disrespectful to us who is Muslim and can’t eat pork, For instance there is only one sandwich which only contains beef. Therefore I want to talk to Rector Hans Erik Duschek-Hansen. Second, it’s not only the lack of beef that is the problem; it’s also the disgusting tuna, egg and vegetarian sandwiches that are far below the average. I think all canteens must have a responsibility to provide safe food and safe food means that it is prepared, cooked, transported and served in such a way as to retain nutrients, because the kind of food that we in our Gymnasium gets are not healthy.
På forhånd tak!!
Svar #1
06. september 2010 af nillemusen (Slettet)
First I want to say that in our school canteen, there is a bigger variety of pork than beef. I think it is disrespectful to us who is Muslim and can’t eat pork.(punktum i stedet for komma) For instance there is only one sandwich which only contains beef. Therefore I want to talk to the headmaster Hans Erik Duschek-Hansen. Second, it’s not only the lack of beef that is the problem; it’s also the disgusting tuna, egg and vegetarian sandwiches that are far below the average. I think all canteens must have a responsibility to provide safe food and safe food means that it is prepared, cooked, transported and served in such a way as to retain nutrients, because the kind of food that we in our Gymnasium get(ikke s på) are not healthy.
derudover er der ikke noget der hedder gymnasium på engelsk så man ville kalde det High School (USA, 14-18 årige) eller secondary school (UK)
Svar #3
06. september 2010 af nillemusen (Slettet)
det var godt :) håber ikk jeg har overset nogle fejl, men det er nok en god ide lige at læse den igennem igen
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