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My memorable place

My tour to London was very memor-able, and I just can recommend that. There is so many things to see, for all types of people, I had scribed that block to give you a inspiration to your next holly day, London is a great Town.

Dear readers
Dear readers. I want to tell you about London. London is a very memorable place for me. I was there in may 2007. It was my mother, who invited me to London, but her friend and her daughter was also in Lon-don. It was just a five days tour, but I was a unforget-table experience for me.

The first we do
Then we came to London, we checked in on ours ho-tel. It was very wonderful.
It was a big town compare to my home town Randers. The first we really saw, was a lot of taxies, a lot of red double buses and a lot of people. The weather was like the weather in Den-mark, it was a bit cloudy and one day it rained too.

The impression
The first impression I get, was when I walked up at the street and I see all the many people, who was over all. Up and down at the streets, over all in the centers and so on.. The next impression was all the high apartments, they was so big I never had seen before.

Experiences in London
we walked up and down the street, it was an ex-perience in itself, to see all the business, all the dif-ferent types of peoples and all the clothes. It was so crazy so much clothes, I just like to buy it all. An-other experience was then I was in Madame Tussauds. It was so crazy so much the wax figures looks like the real people. I was al-most afraid to go too close at them, because it looks so good a real person. An-other experience in London is London eye, it is so beautiful and its a thing you are need to see if you came to London. You are also need to see: Big Ben, Buckingham palace, The Tower of London, Wimble-don, St Paul's Cathedral, Kensington palace. That is also a lot of things who make a impression at me.

Why I think you should go to London
I think London is a very great city. It has made great impression on me and I think it can make an big impression too, on oth-er people if they just either interested in fashion, celeb-rities, musicals or just inter-ested in to see something new. I just can recommend that.

Karoline Carlsen 9.a (439)

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My memorable place

My tour to London was very memor-able, and I just can recommend that. There is so many things to see(,) for all types of people, I had scribed that block to give you a inspiration to your next holly day, London is a great Town.

Dear readers
Dear readers. I want to tell you about London. London is a very memorable place for me. I was there in may 2007. It was my mother, who invited me to London, but her friend and her daughter was also in Lon-don. It was just a five days tour, but I was a unforget-table experience for me.

The first we do
Then we came to London, we checked in on ours ho-tel. It was very wonderful.
It was a big town compare to my home town Randers. The first we really saw, was a lot of taxies, a lot of red double buses and a lot of people. The weather was like the weather in Den-mark, it was a bit cloudy and one day it rained too.

The impression
The first impression I get, was when I walked up at the street and I see all the many people, who was over all. Up and down at the streets, over all in the centers and so on.. The next impression was all the high apartments, they was so big I never had seen before.

Experiences in London
we walked up and down the street, it was an ex-perience in itself, to see all the business, all the dif-ferent types of peoples and all the clothes. It was so crazy so much clothes, I just like to buy it all. An-other experience was then I was in Madame Tussauds. It was so crazy so much the wax figures looks like the real people. I was al-most afraid to go too close at them, because it looks so good a real person. An-other experience in London is London eye, it is so beautiful and its a thing you are need to see if you came to London. You are also need to see: Big Ben, Buckingham palace, The Tower of London, Wimble-don, St Paul's Cathedral, Kensington palace. That is also a lot of things who make a impression at me.

Why I think you should go to London
I think London is a very great city. It has made great impression on me and I think it can make an big impression too, on oth-er people if they just either interested in fashion, celeb-rities, musicals or just inter-ested in to see something new. I just can recommend that.

Karoline Carlsen 9.a (439)