Engelsk det haster :(

  Hej allesammen. Jeg har skrevet et short essay, hvor jeg skal argumentere nogle 2 dillemas, og jeg skulle spørger om I kan rette mine stavefejl i denne opgave, og kan i også give mig nogle gode råd til hvad jeg kan gøre bedre?:)

Part 1

I think that they should save all of them as possible. When I read this little story I thinking about the Titanic movie where the ship were beginning to sinking, and the people were fighting to a get a seats in the boats. So my argument will be that they have to safe every single person in the cold, grey waters of the Atlantic are people with a screaming to be saved. To died in the Atlantic will not be good. It will be a painful death, to died in the sea. So I think they have to safe every people which is in danger.       

Part 2

Well I think that Bert have to obey captain because a captain is a person who is a leader who provides so Bert have to obey captain Flintheart no matter what. If captain Flintheart treats Bert bad than he must obey him because that's the rules and he cannot just break the rules.