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Hej. Jeg skal oversætte følgende tekst til engelsk, og det har jeg gjort. Så, er der ikke nogen, der gider kigge det igennem. Jeg bliver rigtig glad, hvis nogen gøre det :)
Der var blevet gennemført en række racelove i perioden fra 1910 til 1948, men det var først efter 1948, at undertrykkelsen blev sat i system. Striden, der senere blev premierminister, udtalte: ”Europæerne må stå fast og blive ved at være herre i Sydafrika. Hvis vi opgiver ideen om et herrefolk og lader ikke-europæerne få stemmeret og de samme udviklingsmuligheder som os, hvordan vil europæerne da kunne fortsætte med at herske?”. Det var Henrik Verwoerd, der fik overdraget ansvaret for de nye racelove. De indeholdt forbud mod alle blandede ægteskaber; der var isolerede boligområder for hver racegruppe i byerne; der kom krav om pas for alle afrikanere; universiteterne blev lukket for afrikanere, der var raceadskillelse i skoler, fagforeninger, i biografer, på restauranter m.v.
Det var drømmen om adskilt udvikling – Apartheid – der blev til virkelighed. De sorte hørte hjemme i reservater - ”bantustans” - og måtte kun betræde den ”hvide” jord for at arbejde for hvide mennesker.
There were a number of racial laws in the period 1910 to 1948, but it was only after 1948 that the repression was organized. Strijden, who later became prime minister, said: "Europeans must stand firm and continue to be master in South Africa. If we abandon the idea of a master race and allow non-Europeans to vote and the same development opportunities as us, then how will Europeans be able to continue to reign? ". It was Hendrik Verwoerd, who was assigned responsibility for the new racial laws.
They included a ban on all mixed marriages, which were isolated residential areas for each racial group in cities; the requirement for a passport for all Africans, the universities were closed to Africans who were racial segregation in schools, unions, cinemas, restaurants etc.
It was the dream of separate development - apartheid - which came true. The black belonged in sanctuaries - "bantustans" - and had only set foot on the "white" land to work for white people.
Svar #1
29. november 2010 af Stygotius
There were a number of racial laws in the period 1910 to 1948, but it was only after 1948 that (the) repression was organized. Strijden, who later became prime minister, said: "Europeans must stand firm and continue to be master in South Africa. If we abandon the idea of a master race and allow non-Europeans to vote and to have the same development opportunities as us, then how will Europeans be able to continue to reign? ". (It was) Hendrik Verwoerd was the one to whom(,who was assigned) responsibility for the new racial laws was assigned.
They included a ban on all mixed marriages, (which) and couples were isolated in residential areas, one for each racial group in the cities; the (requirement for) necessity of a passport for all Africans, the universities were closed to Africans who were racially segregated(ion) in schools, unions, cinemas, restaurants etc.
It was the dream of a separate development - apartheid - which came true. The black belonged in sanctuaries - "bantustans" - and (had) were only allowed to set foot on (the) "white" (land) soil to do work for white people.
Svar #3
30. november 2010 af Stygotius
En lille rettelse:
Husk et komma mellem "Africans" og "who were".
Husk også "the fact that" foran "universities were closed to Africans"
Svar #4
30. november 2010 af smilme (Slettet)
ok, tak for det.
Jeg ved godt det er irriterende, men vil du ikke også kigge det her oversættelse igennem. Vil blive meget meget taknemmelig hvis du gjorde :)
The resistance
The new racial laws meant a turning point for the African political movement in South Africa. The African National Congress (ANC) had new and more radical leaders, and it turned into a mass movement. In the 1950´s,there was given the signal for mass demonstrations against a series of racial laws: The Africans sat on the white peoples benches, walked into the white stores, etc during a peaceful demonstration on 21 March 1960 in Sharpeville police opened fire into the crowd, and killed 69 Africans, and hurted 178, shortly after the Congress Party was banned.
Nationalist government´s responses to these actions were a series of laws gradually transformed South Africa into a police state with severe punishments for disobedience and ability to imprison anyone indefinitely.
Social unrest and opposition to the government forced the introduction of boernes language. Afrikaans, in schools was led in 1976, to unrest in the district of Soweto in Johannesburg, where 400 were killed.
The modern South Africa is characterized by a growing tension between population groups.
Svar #5
30. november 2010 af Stygotius
The resistance
The new racial laws meant a turning point for the African political movement in South Africa. The African National Congress (ANC) (had) elected new and more radical leaders(,) and (it) turned into a mass movement. In the 1950(´)s(,there was given the signal for) mass demonstrations against a series of racial laws were initiated: The Africans sat on (the white peoples) benches marked "whites only", walked into the (white stores) shops for whites only(, etc) and did similar things. (d)During a peaceful demonstration on 21 March 1960 in Sharpeville police (opened fire) fired into (the) a crowd(, and killed) killing 69 Africans, and (hurted) injuring 178(, s)Shortly after the Congress Party was banned.
Nationalist government(´s) response(s) to these actions (were) included a series of laws which gradually (transformed) turned South Africa into a police state with severe (punishments) penalties for disobedience and (ability) the power to imprison anyone indefinitely.
(Social unrest and opposition to the government forced the introduction of boernes language. Afrikaans, in schools was led in 1976, to unrest in the district of Soweto in Johannesburg, where 400 were killed.)
In 1976 the forced introduction in schools of Afrikaans, the Boer language, led to unrest in Soweto, a Johannesburg district, and 400 people lost their lives.
(The m)Modern South Africa is characterized by a growing tension between population groups.
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