Engelsk jul :)

Hej allesammen. Har en engelsk stil for til imorgen om julen, og jeg er ikke så sikker på min engelsk grammatik. Så jeg håbede på at der måske var en der lige ville tage et hurtigt kig på dette, evt. komme med nogle rettelser. :)

A Speciel Christmas.

Dear Diary.
It was finally Christmas Eve. Outside the window the snow fell like small crystals.
My sister is 6 years old, the entire month she has done nothing but talk about Santa Claus. When I was little, I believed in Santa Claus. He was a white-bearded man
wearing a red coat with white collar and cuffs, white-cuffed red trousers, a black leather belt and black boots. He had a sleigh with eight reindeers, Dasher, Dancer,
Prancer, Vixen, Comet, Cupid, Blitzen and Rudolf, and as we alle know, Rudolf is in the front with he's red nose.
According to my sister, he is living on the North Pole, with his wife Mrs. Claus. He had a few helpers to help him make presents to the sweet children. I do not believe
in him anymore, but my sister do, very much. She believes that he is coming tonight, sharing out gifts to all those who have been good this year.
I never actually met Santa, but every Christmas morning, my sister tells me that she heard Santa coming down the chimney. She always tells me that she can see reindeer
tracks outside the house, but i do not believe her, i just think it is tracks from a dog.
This Christmas will not be like any other Christmas' we've had. My father has been stationed in Afghanistan the last several years, but he is for once at home during
christmas. This will be the best Christmas Eve, ever! My aunt, uncle, cousin and grandmother is also coming.
I have wanted me pants, tops, gift cards, camera, shoes and other nice hair products and face masks. I hope my parents bought the camera! :) it would be so nice.
I bought them a salt and pepper mill, and my dad gets a little extra gift from my sister and me. we've made a little book with a lot of pictures of the family, so
he can take it with him, when he goes back to Afghanistan.