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03. maj 2005 af
hln (Slettet)
Nogen der vil læse dette stykke igennem og se om der er bogen fejl....
Who is to blame for stealing a generation?
Once Australian policy was to remove indigenous children and try to integrate them into white Australian.
· The policy was in operation 1910, where over ten thousands of indigenous children were removed from there homes, and integrated into white Australians. The children must be raised in a white school, a missionary school and as white children, were they have to learn duty, service and responsibility.
Julie Lavall is a real-life example of the policy of removing aboriginal children.
· She was 3 weeks old where she was being removed from her mutter. That she has been removed from her home. She has many unanswered question, she do not know who her mutter I, or the rest of her family. She says in the first part line 19. “ I have lived in 32 years of my life not knowing who I was, were I come from and which racial group I belonged to. I need my pain acknowledged, or I will never heal” this shows, that she her removal from her mutter has affected her live so much even though it is 32 years ago. She does not fell like she belongs to this place.
In 1997 Australia’s Human Rights Commission released a report about the treatment of the Australia aborigines. The report accused the Government of genocide.
· The government forcibly removes the children, and bring them up into a different cultural group. The government annihilate the children’s childhood and the past they have had together with there biologically parents. The children do not know there really identity. The children were also abuse, and in different ways. They were physically and sexually abused. Many children were also exploited as cheap labour. John Moriarty tells about the times were they used to catch them in the shower and beat them whit thick rubber hoses.
Not all Australians support the path of reconciliation.
· Pauline Hanson says that families were separated in the interest of the child welfare.
A recent polls show that a number of people would considering to vote for the new One Nation party. The Aborigines get a lot of money, so the children can go to a private school.
Who is to blame for stealing a generation?
Once Australian policy was to remove indigenous children and try to integrate them into white Australian.
· The policy was in operation 1910, where over ten thousands of indigenous children were removed from there homes, and integrated into white Australians. The children must be raised in a white school, a missionary school and as white children, were they have to learn duty, service and responsibility.
Julie Lavall is a real-life example of the policy of removing aboriginal children.
· She was 3 weeks old where she was being removed from her mutter. That she has been removed from her home. She has many unanswered question, she do not know who her mutter I, or the rest of her family. She says in the first part line 19. “ I have lived in 32 years of my life not knowing who I was, were I come from and which racial group I belonged to. I need my pain acknowledged, or I will never heal” this shows, that she her removal from her mutter has affected her live so much even though it is 32 years ago. She does not fell like she belongs to this place.
In 1997 Australia’s Human Rights Commission released a report about the treatment of the Australia aborigines. The report accused the Government of genocide.
· The government forcibly removes the children, and bring them up into a different cultural group. The government annihilate the children’s childhood and the past they have had together with there biologically parents. The children do not know there really identity. The children were also abuse, and in different ways. They were physically and sexually abused. Many children were also exploited as cheap labour. John Moriarty tells about the times were they used to catch them in the shower and beat them whit thick rubber hoses.
Not all Australians support the path of reconciliation.
· Pauline Hanson says that families were separated in the interest of the child welfare.
A recent polls show that a number of people would considering to vote for the new One Nation party. The Aborigines get a lot of money, so the children can go to a private school.
Svar #2
03. maj 2005 af silvertouch (Slettet)
hej jeg har kigget lidt på din tekst, og har rettet lidt af de basiske fejl(kig hellere om det er rigtigt hehe)
men pas på nutid/datid (det skal være samme tid alt sammen) og der er også flere steder det kikser lidt med ordstilling. Håber du kan bruge det til noget og at det ihvertfald hjalp med de ¨å ting jeg nu har rettet. nu er de der da ihvertfald ikke ! held og lykke
Once Australian policy was to remove indigenous children and try to integrate them into white Australian.
· The policy was in operation 1910 where over ten thousands of indigenous children were removed from their homes, and integrated into white Australians. The children must be raised in a white school, a missionary school, and as white children were they have to learn duty, service and responsibility.
Julie Lavall is a real-life example of the policy of removing aboriginal children.
· She was 3 weeks old when she was being removed from her mother. That she has been removed from her home. She has many unanswered questions; she does not know who her mother is, or the rest of her family. She says in the first part line 19. “I have lived in 32 years of my life not knowing who I was, were I come from and which racial group I belonged to. I need my pain acknowledged, or I will never heal” this shows that the removal from her mother has affected her live so much even though it is 32 years ago. She does not feel like she belongs to this place.
In 1997 Australia’s Human Rights Commission released a report about the treatment of the Australia aborigines. The report accused the Government of genocide.
· The government forcibly removes the children, and bring them up into a different cultural group. The government annihilate the children’s childhood and the past they have had together with their biologically parents. The children do not know their really identity. The children were also abused, and in different ways. They were physically and sexually abused. Many children were also exploited as cheap labour. John Moriarty tells about the times were they used to catch them in the shower and beat them whit thick rubber hoses.
Not all Australians support the path of reconciliation.
· Pauline Hanson says that families were separated in the interest of the child´s welfare.
A recent polls shows that a number of people would consider to vote for the new One Nation party. The Aborigines get a lot of money, so the children can go to a private school.
men pas på nutid/datid (det skal være samme tid alt sammen) og der er også flere steder det kikser lidt med ordstilling. Håber du kan bruge det til noget og at det ihvertfald hjalp med de ¨å ting jeg nu har rettet. nu er de der da ihvertfald ikke ! held og lykke
Once Australian policy was to remove indigenous children and try to integrate them into white Australian.
· The policy was in operation 1910 where over ten thousands of indigenous children were removed from their homes, and integrated into white Australians. The children must be raised in a white school, a missionary school, and as white children were they have to learn duty, service and responsibility.
Julie Lavall is a real-life example of the policy of removing aboriginal children.
· She was 3 weeks old when she was being removed from her mother. That she has been removed from her home. She has many unanswered questions; she does not know who her mother is, or the rest of her family. She says in the first part line 19. “I have lived in 32 years of my life not knowing who I was, were I come from and which racial group I belonged to. I need my pain acknowledged, or I will never heal” this shows that the removal from her mother has affected her live so much even though it is 32 years ago. She does not feel like she belongs to this place.
In 1997 Australia’s Human Rights Commission released a report about the treatment of the Australia aborigines. The report accused the Government of genocide.
· The government forcibly removes the children, and bring them up into a different cultural group. The government annihilate the children’s childhood and the past they have had together with their biologically parents. The children do not know their really identity. The children were also abused, and in different ways. They were physically and sexually abused. Many children were also exploited as cheap labour. John Moriarty tells about the times were they used to catch them in the shower and beat them whit thick rubber hoses.
Not all Australians support the path of reconciliation.
· Pauline Hanson says that families were separated in the interest of the child´s welfare.
A recent polls shows that a number of people would consider to vote for the new One Nation party. The Aborigines get a lot of money, so the children can go to a private school.
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