Engelsk oversættelse

nogen der vil rette min oversættelse??

på forhånd tak :)

AMERIKANSKE TV-SERIER AFSPEJLER DERES SAMTID:
Peter og Charles er ved at overveje, om deres nye tv-serie skal ende lykkeligt? Egentlig havde de satset på, at seriens hovedperson, Lou, ville dø fredeligt efter et virkeligt langt, begivenhedsrigt liv. Men deres producer havde sagt: ”Tiden er ikke til lange familieserier mere, folk ønsker handling, drama, spænding, gåder – ikke selvtilfredshed og løsninger…” Så nu skal Lou enten dø, fordi hans datters kæreste, der lige er blevet løsladt fra fængsel, mangler penge – eller fordi han får et hjerteslag af glæde over, at hans kone endelig bliver udnævnt til professor i 2. verdenskrigs historie, selvom hun har stjålet *forskningsresultatet fra en dygtig studerende, som hun har forgiftet efter at hun har forført *denne. Alt dette ved Lou naturligvis ikke noget om.
*Et forskningsresultat: a scientific result *denne: him.

Oversættelse:

American television series reflects their contemporaries.
Peter and Charles are considering if their new television series should end happily? Actually they had aimed to the fact that the series main character, Lou, would die peacefully after a very long, eventful life. But their producer had said “The times is not for long family series anymore, people want story, drama, excitement and riddles – not smug and solutions”. So now Lou has to die either because his daughter’s boyfriend, who has just been released from prison, needs money or because he gets a heart attack from happiness because his wife is finally appointed professor in the Second World War’s history even though she has stolen the scientific result from a clever student whom she has poisoned after she has seduced him. Naturally Lou knows nothing about all of this.