Halv sides engelsk. Rettelse haster 7 klasse niveau

 I have a dream
I have a dream and that dream is far away from the reality of this world. In that dream there will be no more hate, no more wars, no more poverty, more democracy, I mean democracy to all the people for everyone… We can take look at an example some examples, Egypt, Libya and the other countries in Asia and the Middle East. Fight’s for democracy They're fighting for democracy (eller lignende? prøv at lave en fuldkommen sætning her). One should not fight for it, it'll it should just be there.
There is war are wars in which one two (når det efterfølges af each other) or more countries are going against each other, and there is war are wars among people who disagree. It's also two different things but one thing is for sure (som sådan ikke to forskellige ting... de to udelukker jo ikke hinanden!). War is not a thing that you associate with something good. War is and remains devastating, and it is often related to religion or other things. I do not believe that one day there will be a world without war and unrest. I think it's a difficult thing to imagine, for we humans will never have the same attitudes, opinions, and together believe in different things (det giver ikke mening ift. resten af sætningen - prøv selv at omformulere). Therefore it would be almost impossible to have a world without war - that is, a totally peaceful world. Some places are war lives (kan ikke helt hitte ud af hvad du prøver at sige her) they live every day of their whole lives in a land without peace. War often affects innocent people, and in many cases children. That is partly (du behøver ikke partly, når du også skriver also) also a reason why I think war is a terrible thing. War is like an inner pain in me a pain within me, and it often affects all the innocent people (du gentager dig selv). One can not cannot but feel with them. War is short (det er jeg nu ikek helt enig i...), a horrible thing that nobody should experience. I know that there are many people living in poverty and insecurity, because their country is affected by war and disasters. Although I think it's impossible, I would hope that in the future there will be no war and unrest around the world. And that we all can can all live in peace and enjoy our lives. And the same with poverty, where some are living experiencing a whole day with only a little food and drink. The poor must have a good place to live, like everyone else, and be able to buy the things they want and be happy.

Nu har jeg ikke genlæst det hele, men det virker som om du gentager dig selv en del. Ellers ret højt niveau for 7. klasse skulle jeg mene ;)

jeg kom til at tænke over sammentrækningerne da jeg læste teksten:

Jeg ville ikke bruge sammentrækninger i en skriftlig opgave. Måske i direkte tale, men ellers ville jeg lade være. At sammentrække ord, vil jeg mene, er primært noget man gør mundtligt og i uformelle tekster.

Gør man det så alligevel, så skal det ikke kun være hist og her, men konsekvent.

Bare et forslag. =)

Jeg skal læse det op mundtligt :)

Jeg vil foreslå dig ikke at skrive stort set PRÆCIS det, som Martin Luther King sagde i 1960'erne, i den kendte tale "I have a dream" some SJOVT NOK også er din titel.

Hvis din lærer finder ud af dette, hvilken han/hun nok gør, ser det ikke for godt ud.