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Retning af kort Engelsk stil

07. april 2014 af patriciajens (Slettet) - Niveau: 8. klasse

Hej.. Jeg kunne godt tænke mig lidt hjælp med min Engelsk stil.. Håber der er nogen der vil være så søde :)

A night to remember

The story is about a girl named Melissa. Melissa is going on a double date, at the prom, with her twin sister, Stacy. Melissa is going with her boyfriend, Ronnie, and Stacy with her boyfriend Chaz.

Melissa is excited about the prom. And by the midnight, her life would have changed.

Melissa and her sister are now ready for the prom, and they are wearing big gowns and perfect hair, and of course the corsage from their boyfriends. They are all taking at the prom together in a limo.

When they arrive at the prom, Stacy wants to talk to Melissa. She knows that Ronnie and Melissa is planning to have sex, and need to stop it, because her parents will ruin her life if they are hearing about it. Melissa is pissed on Ronnie, for telling their secret to Chaz. But she forgives him after a lot of “sweet talk”.

After a moment they are laying on a floor and  put their arms round each other.

“I love you,” he whispers in her ear. “I love you too” She whispers back.

So the whole night wasn´t a completely perfect night, but the end of the night was definitely Perfect. 

- Håber i vil, det haster lidt ;)


Svar #1
07. april 2014 af patriciajens (Slettet)

Kom nuu? Er der nogle der vil hjælpe? :)


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Svar #2
07. april 2014 af snugglepuff (Slettet)

jeg har rettet lidt, men er ikke helt 100 på at der ikke er fejl endnu.

The story is about a girl named Melissa. Melissa is going on a double date with her sister, Stacy, at the prom. Melissa is going to the prom with her boyfriend, Ronnie, and Stacy is going with her boyfriend Chaz.

Melissa is excited about the prom. And by midnight, her life is going to change.

Melissa and her sister are now ready for the prom. They are wearing big gowns, the hair is perfect, and of course they are wearing the corsage they have gotten from their boyfriends. They are all driving together to the prom in a limousine.

When they arrive at the prom, Stacy wants to talk to Melissa. She knows that Ronnie and Melissa is planning to have sex, and needs to stop it, because her parents will ruin her life if they hear about it. Melissa is mad on Ronnie for telling their secret to Chaz, but she forgives him after a lot of “sweet talk”.

After a moment they are laying on the floor and put their arms around each other.

Ronnie whispers in her ear: “I love you” “I love you too” She whispers back.

So the whole night wasn´t a completely perfect night, but the end of the night was definitely perfect. 


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