Retning af tekst

06. maj kl. 15:40 af Lektiohelp - Niveau: 9. klasse
Hej. Jeg er netop færdig med min engelsk tekst, der handler om Bill Gates. Er der mon nogen, der kan sige mig om min tekst indeholder fejl i form af stavning, komme etc?

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Who is Bill Gates?

Bill Gates is one of the most well-known people in the world. Many of us know him as the co-founder and former CEO of Microsoft, but he is also an American programmer, entrepreneur, investor and philanthropist.
His full Name: William Henry Gates was born on October 28, 1955 in Seattle, Washington, whose parents were William H. and Mary Gates.
Bill Gates has been married to Mellinda Gates since 1994 (they may be divorced now in 2022?) Together they have three children: Jennifer Katharina, Phoebe Adele and Rory John.

When Bill Gates was at school as young, he really got bored very soon, he almost only played some board games and read fiction books - but he really loved math. Bill Gates was sent to Lakeside Preparatory School at 13 years old, where he met his future business partner, Paul Allen. At the time when Bill Gates was young there didn’t exist computers etc. as today, so he found the computer fascinating. The first computer program he wrote was a version of tic-tac-toe. In 1973 which was 2 years before he started the software Company “Microsoft”, Bill Gates dropped out of college to pursue his business, “Microsoft”, with his partner Allen, which turned out to went from a little company, with two people working on scripts, to a very successful company, and today the largest PC company.
Bill Gates has invented a lot of things, but the most popular and breakthrough technologies he has invented are: Robot dexterity, New-wave nuclear power, Predicting preemies, Custom cancer vaccines and Xbox.

Bill Gates has been seen as a very smart man with a Big brain, but he is also seen as a very generous man, who helps where he can, and therefore he has been seen as a hero.
“Money has no utility to me beyond a certain point. Its utility is entirely in building an organization and getting the resources out to the poorest in the world.” It is what Bill Gates said, and therefore he and his wife, Melinda, have the Foundation “The Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation”, which helps hospitals by founding hospitals, founding food for kids, and developing clean energy.
He has saved tens of millions of lives thanks to his foundation, who also uses Microsoft's technology to help hospitals. Not at least Bill Gates has also used his own money to fund hospitals in the US, and he plans by the time he has died to give away 95% of his total money to help people who need help.

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