Engelsk grammatik

 Hej! :) Jeg har nu lavet lavet en opgave i engelsk, men er i tvivl om grammatikken er korrekt. Er der nogen der vil hjælpe? :)

Dear Tony Tweet
Here are my answers for your question. If you need me to answer more of yours questions or take part of your survey, I will look forward to hear from you.

I believe that Twitter helps a lot of youngsters to express their opinion. They might be braver to share what they think on twitter, than they are sharing it in reality. At the same time there is a little twist – sometimes you can appear different on Twitter than in reality, because of your thoroughly considered updates. You re-think the way to state your opinion much more than you do in reality. Based on my opinion, Twitter does not improve the youngsters’ ability to socialize. We constantly want our friends and acquaintances to know what we are doing, without caring about what they are doing. We want to share more than we want to listen.

One of the dangers of the increased use of Twitter is that the youngsters can get too addicted. They have a high expectation of new updates all the time, and response on their own updates. The addiction of Twitter can and will give the youngsters a hard time focusing on their homework and perform well at school. If the friends on twitter are not active, we get bored because we make Twitter to our daily life. So when Twitter stalls, our reality does too.

The English language could be affected by twitter in a low degree. The abbreviations from Twitter could be transferred to the English language. Our literature language could be threatened by the modern twitter language that will develop the English language and make it more modern.

I Believe that Twitter and services such as Twitter, will try to compete each other all the time, and we as consumers will end up having services with applications we never thought of having. The competition will never stop, and the technology would evolve all the time. I do believe that a lot of youngsters in the future will still be addicted to Twitter and those services. But I also believe that many youngsters will find their own balance between those services, and their daily life, as many youngsters do today.