Engelsk
Engelsk: Rettelse af lille tekst.. Pliz Help
Dansk:
Min fars nye job er i det nordlige England, i Newcastle. Indtil vi har fundet et ny hus deroppe,1 bor vi hos min onkel. Han er en rar mand, og det er et stort hus, men der er meget koldt, fordi husets varmeanlæg er gået i stykker. Min mor og far glæder sig til at flytte, men en af min brors venner, William, blev så ked af det, at han begyndte at græde, så nu siger min bror, at han vil flytte ind hos William. Jeg vil1le også foretrække at blive, men min far siger, at Newcastle har Englands kønneste piger, så måske er det ikke helt så slemt.
Jeg har oversættet det på Engelsk, så jeg vil bed om, der nogen vil ret det til mig.
English:
My fathers job is in the north England. Until we has founded a house up there, we live with my uncle. He is a nice man, and it is a big house, but there are vey cold, because the houses heating system has pieces of. My mother and father look forward to moving, but one of my brothers friends, William, was got so sad, that he began to cry, so now my brother says, that he will1 move back home with Wil+¨35liam. I will also prefe to stay, but my dad says, that Newcastl5r have Britains prettiest girls, so maybe it is not all that bad.
Håber nogen der kan ret et til mig, hurtigst muligt.. Tak
Svar #1
11. oktober 2011 af Thinkpositive (Slettet)
Den første sætning bør efter min mening være sådan her:
My fathers new job is in the Northn of England in Newcastle.
Svar #3
11. oktober 2011 af Thinkpositive (Slettet)
Jeg retter det jeg kan, men du skal selv klare tegnsætningen :)
My fathers new job is in the Northn of England in Newcastle. We live with my onkel, until we have founded a new house up there. He is a nice man and he has a big house, but there is cold, because heating was gone to pieces in the house. My mother and father are looking forward to move, but one of my brothers friends was so sad that he began to cry. My brother says that he also would prefer to stay now, but my father says that Newcastle has Englands most beautiful girls, so maybe it isn´t so bad.
Et råd til dig er at du skal øve dig på at få et "flow" i den tekst du skriver! :)
Svar #5
12. oktober 2011 af Stygotius (Slettet)
Vil V I L ikke have at der lægges pres ved at skrige og råbe "Haster" !!
Den oprindelige engelske tekst er noget af det værste, utilladelige sjuskearbjede man har set i årevis.
Du vil bare have andre til at lave dit arbejde og gider ikke gøre noget selv overhovedet. Til lykke !!!
My (fathers) father's job is in Newcastle in the north of England. Until we (has) have found(ed) a house up there, we live with my uncle. He is a nice man, and it is a big house, but (there are vey) it's very cold(,) because the (houses) heating system has (gone to pieces of) broken down. My mother and father look forward to moving, but (one) a friend of my (brothers friends) brother's, William, was (got) so sad(,) that he began to cry(, so now m) My brother now says(,) that he will1????? move (back home) in with (Wil+¨35liam) William. I (will also prefe) too prefer to stay, but my dad says(,) that Newcastl5r ?????? (have) has (Britains) Britain's prettiest girls(,) so maybe it is not all that bad.
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