Lille engelsk rettelse :-)

Hej alle.

Er der mon en der gider rette denne lille engelsktekst for mig?

På forhånd tak :-)

His steps are heavy. I feel the pain that occurs in him for each step he is taking. It seems like a struggle for him to continue the walking - but yet he takes one step after the other. It’s raining heavily; I can't see clearly but Burns painful expressions on his face are distinct to observe. Suddenly he stops in the middle of the field. I see anger in his eyes; his look wanders around as though he got paranoid over something. Did he hear something strange? Will he finally turn around and heading home? Not yet - he starts walking. He drags himself along the muddy ground without any purpose or any awareness of directions. What has led him here - and makes him stay?
 
He stumbles along the field and comes across a tree that feels very slimy. Burns is looking searchingly at the tree. His reaction is strange - he looks frightened. He stares at the tree for a long time, he has a weird expression on his face. And then he runs - he runs as if an wild animal is chasing him.
But - what crosses his mind leaves me clueless - suddenly he stops running and turns back to the tree. You can still observe the fear in his eyes but now he is looking clarified in a strange way as well.
He takes off his clothes and lies on the ground all naked. He lies in this position for a few minutes. His eyes is closed, his fear has fade away and he is getting calmer - he looks so calm that he might actually has fall asleep. It is a strange place for sleeping, though he seems to be very comfortable with everything just at the moment - he enjoys it so much that not even the trickling rain can make him get up and get dressed again. No - his mind is far away from this field, exact this moment is right for him. It might seem wrong on the surface but Burns seems pleased just like this.