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I am stranded on a island. We had planned to sail on the ocean. It was very nice, but Tyler and I were fighting. Tyler would not stay with me....I did not care. I did not know what to do. Suddenly there was a sound. I found it. I really hope you will find the bottle very soon.

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My name is Samantha Landon. I have written this message because I need you.  I am stranded on an island and I don’t know what I shall do.  I am alone and I need your help. I come from USA. I was out in a boat with my boyfriend Tyler We had planned to sail on the ocean. It was very nice, but Tyler and I were fighting Tyler would not stay with me. I did not care. He jumps out of the boat and down to the water so he could swim into the beach. I would sail further so I did. I was really angry and sad, and the whole thing was doesn't matter. I was stupid and I let the boat go its own way, I was don’t care. I fell asleep. And suddenly I woke up. I was not in the boat more. I was on a desert island. I was really afraid. Afraid of everything. I did not know what I should do. I was all alone on the beach. But where was my boat? It was gone. Totally gone. It was scary.  Suddenly there was a sound, it comes from the water. It was a marine turtle, a big one. The only I thing I have with me, are my rucksack. I have some food in it, and it was good because I am really hungry. I have a bottle too, so I would look after a pen and some paper in my bag. I found it! I was so glad. I would make a bottle message. So when I had written my message to you finish will I put it in the bottle and put it in the water, so long out I can.  And after that will I just wait on you, the finder. I Hope the person that find this message believe me and will help me, because it’s a real story. I would have you shall find me and help me. I have not so much food and water with me, so I cannot be here so much more than a week. I don’t need self a come to with, just if you could get some help to me so I could come home again. You would do so I would be so happy. I will not die on a desert island I really hope you will find the bottle very soon, and so help me and not just blow it away. I will love you the rest of my life if you will help me, and I will do everything for you. Please help me!

From Samantha Landon.

Der er da ingen fortsættelse af det øverste brev, -bare en gentagelse.

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