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Hej. Er der nogle, der vil læse mit abstract igennem, er det et  korrekt abstract og er det skrevet på korrekt engelsk?

På forhånd tak :-)

This paper investigates the theme "Intercultural Migration" in the film "Bread and Roses" (Ken Loach) and "Gegen die Wand" (Fatih Akin). It begins with comparison of the two films, where the focus is on the characters cultures, the reason why they migrate and which pull and push factors. Then the paper focuses on the similarities and differences between the main characters. Then it will explained the environment in respectively Turkey vs. Germany and Mexico vs. USA. Afterwards the paper investigates the films fiction in relation to the data. This paper also focus on the Analysis and interpretation of a selected picture from each film and then how the film and how the film is received. The paper provides a perspective for the film Maria Full of grace at the end.  The paper is  partly based on based on texts from lessons, analysis of the film and websites.